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Translation - Turkish-English - gözlerim senin için uyanık,ceylan gözlüm

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gözlerim senin için uyanık,ceylan gözlüm
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Submitted by gnavardauskaite
Source language: Turkish Translated by rojberdan

Gözlerim senin için uyanık, ceylan gözlüm.

Title
My eyes
Translation
English

Translated by 44hazal44
Target language: English

My eyes are wide for you, my gazelle-eyes.
Remarks about the translation
being gazelle-eyed --> having alluring eyes (like a gazelle)
Last validated or edited by lilian canale - 4 April 2010 12:35





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12 March 2010 20:51

Tantine
Number of messages: 2747
Hi 44hazal44

I'm not sure about the word "awake" in this context. I thought maybe the word "wide" might fit better here.

Also, "gazelle eyed" makes the reading a little difficult as it is only an adjective. Would it still work if we put:

"My eyes are wide for you gazelle-eyes"

Let me know

Bises
Tantine

14 March 2010 20:14

44hazal44
Number of messages: 1148
Hi Tantine,

"uyanık" means "awake", that's why I translated it in that way.

Perhaps we could say "my gazelle-eyed one", if it is not too weird.

I agree with your version but I think it would rather be a meaning only translation.
If you think we must put the version you gave above, then we should tick the "meaning only" square.

What do you think ?