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Too many "the"s - they can all come out, in my opinion.

Hi maki_sindja, Kafetzou is right, we don't need so many articles.

What about:

Take me from falsehood to truth.
Take me from darkness to brightness.
Take me from death to immortality.

What do you think?

How about "darkness to light"?

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Yes, Kafetzou, I like it better, I just didn't want to change more words than necessary in maki's translation, but if she agrees we can use "light" instead of "brightness".

What do you say, maki?

Maki says OK!
And thanks!