번역 - 터키어-영어 - help me with the translation of this text

This looks fine, I'd just say "ask for explanations" instead of "request your explanations"

What do you think?

It's ok for 'ask'.

"ondan dolağı hıc bır anlamı yok sana ıngılızce yazamayacağım ıcın"
What about this part?

Hi miss,

Is all that missing?

Yes Lilian

ben ingılızce cok bılmıyorum = I don't know English very well
ondan dolağı hıc bır anlamı yok sana ıngılızce yazamayacağım ıcın, (nothing about this)
senın yorumlarını turkce ıstesem kızarmısın?? = so will you be angry if I ask for your explanations in Turkish ?


CC: lilian canale

Hi Turkishmiss,

Thanks!


Bye.

"and I can't write in English ; that's why you can't understand me. So will you be angry if I ask for your explanations in Turkish ? "

this part is not O.K as meaning.

"ben ingılızce cok bılmıyorum ondan dolağı hıc bır anlamı yok sana ıngılızce yazamayacağım ıcın,senın yorumlarını turkce ıstesem kızarmısın" = "I don't speak English very well so my comments have no sense for you because I can't write them in English so will you be angry if I ask for your explanations in Turkish ? "

Is it OK like this ?? If not, could you give more precision, please ?
Thanks and see you later.

Is everything alright now?

the meaning is correct now.