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12Përkthime - Rusisht-Anglisht - Искорка твоей души,однажды пронзившая моё...

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Kjo kërkesë për përkthim është "Vetëm kuptimi".
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Искорка твоей души,однажды пронзившая моё...
Tekst
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gjuha e tekstit origjinal: Rusisht

Искорка твоей души,однажды пронзившая моё сердце,разбудила в нём вулкан чувств из
которого вырос огненный цветок вечно пылающей страсти и любви к тебе Посмотри на небо...
Видишь звёзды Прислушася каждая из них шепчет о том как я люблю тебя Солнышко

Titull
Once the sparklet of your soul ...
Përkthime
Anglisht

Perkthyer nga ViaLuminosa
Përkthe në: Anglisht

Once the sparklet of your soul pierced my heart, it roused a volcano of feelings, from which а flower of eternal flame and love for you grew.
Look at the sky...
You see the stars(?) Listen, each one (of them) whispers a tale about the love I feel for you, Sunny.
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11 Qershor 2008 23:27

Linak
Numri i postimeve: 48
I think this line is missing from the translation "Посмотри на небо..." - Take a look at the sky...

12 Qershor 2008 00:03

Cinderella
Numri i postimeve: 773
I agree with Linak about missing line.

Искорка - little spark

12 Qershor 2008 06:11

katranjyly
Numri i postimeve: 102
Посмотри на небо not translated. "is whispering" would be better than "whisper". And could we do without the word "tale", there is no word like this in the original.

12 Qershor 2008 09:02

ViaLuminosa
Numri i postimeve: 1116
Yes, I omitted the part with the sky, thanks! About whether we could do without the tale, I'm not sure if it would be correct to say "they whisper about my love" in English, if it is, OK. Let's see what the expert would say.

12 Qershor 2008 11:45

Guzel_R
Numri i postimeve: 225
Мне кажется, что "grew up" не подходит, так как имеет значение стал взрослым, и лучше "grew" в значении произрос.
А цветок не просто цветок, он еще и огненный, поэтому думаю, что нужно добавить "fiery flower"
А, вообще, текст жутко "кудрявый", тяжело передать смысл.
It seems to me that it's not correct to use "grew up" because it means "became adult" and better to use "grew".
And the flower is not just flower it's "огненный" so I'd add "fiery flower"
Really, the text is rather complicated and it's very hard to translate

12 Qershor 2008 11:48

Guzel_R
Numri i postimeve: 225
Забыла добавить про звезды, которые шепчут
Почему бы не перевести как
"Listen to them, each one of them is wispering how I love you"
I forgot to say about wispering stars
Why should it be translated like:
"Listen to them, each one of them is wispering how I love you"?

12 Qershor 2008 12:49

ViaLuminosa
Numri i postimeve: 1116
The text is not composed properly, first of all...
"The fiery flower of flame" is tautology and sounds clumsily in any language. And (as I said above), I'm not sure if a phrase like "...is whispering how I..." or "...whispers about my..." would be correct in English. I think not.

12 Qershor 2008 13:42

katranjyly
Numri i postimeve: 102
ViaLuminosa you translate Солнышко as "my sun". What about "Sunny"?

12 Qershor 2008 15:08

ViaLuminosa
Numri i postimeve: 1116
Sounds good.