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Prevođenje - Njemački-Engleski - Wenn ich in deine Augen sehe dann seh ich wie...

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Wenn ich in deine Augen sehe dann seh ich wie...
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Izvorni jezik: Njemački

Sobald du mich mit deinem Atem auf meiner Haut berührst, spür ich wie sehr du mich liebst.
Primjedbe o prijevodu
also sobald mein freun mich mit seinem atem auf meiner haut berührt das ich spüre wie sehr er mich liebt

bitte in amerikanisches englisch

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As soon as you touch me ..
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Engleski

Preveo Bhatarsaigh
Ciljni jezik: Engleski

As soon as you touch me, with your breath on my skin, I feel how much you love me
Posljednji potvrdio i uredio Tantine - 21 siječanj 2008 17:32





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20 siječanj 2008 23:03

Tantine
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Hi Bhatarsaigh

Your English looks good, but as I don't speak German that well, I need to ask for a poll.

Bises
Tantine

21 siječanj 2008 16:58

sismo
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The sentence sounds too "heavy" in English. I would translate it like this: As soon as your breath touches my skin, I feel how much you love me OR As soon as I feel your breath on my skin I know how much you love me

21 siječanj 2008 17:30

Tantine
Broj poruka: 2747
Hi sismo

Thanks for your contribution, but I think the English is good, just needs some commas to help with the fluidity:

"As soon as you touch me, with your breath on my skin, I feel how much you love me"

I'll edit in this way, then validate, since everyone else is ok with the translation.

Bises
Tantine



I like the poetic way in which it was translated