Traduction - Turc-Anglais - oysa bilmediÄŸin bir ÅŸey var sevgilim

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Titre	oysa bilmediÄŸin bir ÅŸey var sevgilim
Texte Proposé par krizantem_Ã§iÃ§eÄŸim	Langue de départ: Turc Ã–lÃ¼ bir yÄ±lan gibi yatÄ±yordu aramÄ±zda Yorgun, kirli ve umutsuz geÃ§miÅŸim, Oysa bilmediÄŸin bir ÅŸey var sevgilim, Ben sende bÃ¼tÃ¼n aÅŸklarÄ±mÄ± temize Ã§ektim.
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Titre	But there's something you don't know my love
Traduction Anglais Traduit par peabody	Langue d'arrivée: Anglais My tired, dirty and hopeless past Was lying between us like a dead snake But there's something you don't know my love, I redeemed from my former loves through you.

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- 28 Mai 2010 14:37

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	Auteur	Message
		19 Mai 2010 13:36
	lilian canale Nombre de messages: 14972	Hi peabody, There's just one verb which sounds weird: "cleaned". What do you mean by that?
		21 Mai 2010 16:30
	lilian canale Nombre de messages: 14972	Hi Turkish experts, Could you check that "I cleaned all my loves for you." It doesn't make sense to me CC: Sunnybebek cheesecake minuet
		22 Mai 2010 11:35
	minuet Nombre de messages: 298	Literally, it means "I made a clean/fair copy of all my previous loves with you". It may mean "I forgot/overcome all my previous loves with you".
		22 Mai 2010 13:14
	lilian canale Nombre de messages: 14972	What about: "You made me forget all my former loves" or " I forgot all my former loves because of you"? Does any of them convey the original?
		22 Mai 2010 15:07
	minuet Nombre de messages: 298	Yes, I think both of them do.
		22 Mai 2010 16:37
	aydin1 Nombre de messages: 33	"temize Ã§ektim" is not "make me forget"
		22 Mai 2010 19:31
	lilian canale Nombre de messages: 14972	Hi aydin, Sometimes we have to use different words or a more common expression in order to sound natural in English (as long as the meaning doesn't change, of course). Do you think that choice does not convey the meaning of the original? CC: aydin1
		22 Mai 2010 20:15
	merdogan Nombre de messages: 3769	It is for me; It was lying between us like a dead snake, my tired, dirty and hopeless past. But there's something you don't know my love, You made me forget all my former loves.
		23 Mai 2010 15:50
	User10 Nombre de messages: 1173	temize Ã§ekmek-> to engross, to transcribe clearly and correctly. Lit: I transcribed clearly on you all my former loves->(mean.)With you I correct (remedy) the mistakes I made/the bad experiences I had with my former loves, or something like that...
		23 Mai 2010 15:57
	lilian canale Nombre de messages: 14972	Hum...perhaps: "I redeemed from my former loves through you" CC: aydin1 User10
		23 Mai 2010 16:55
	aydin1 Nombre de messages: 33	Perhaps "clean slate" can be used. It conveys the literal Turkish "clean" while meaning to make a new copy free of mistakes.
		23 Mai 2010 17:23
	User10 Nombre de messages: 1173	I agree with Lilian's suggestion, I think "I redeemed from my former loves through you" is the closest possible.
		23 Mai 2010 19:10
	lilian canale Nombre de messages: 14972	Hi Aydin, Do you mean "I wiped the slate clean for you (because of you)"? CC: aydin1
		23 Mai 2010 20:15
	merdogan Nombre de messages: 3769	It is , "I forget all my former loves because of you".
		27 Mai 2010 14:51
	peabody Nombre de messages: 54	"I forgot all my ex-relationships"... (love esperiences.. etc?)