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Перевод - Турецкий-Английский - oysa bilmediÄŸin bir ÅŸey var sevgilim

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oysa bilmediÄŸin bir ÅŸey var sevgilim
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Ölü bir yılan gibi yatıyordu aramızda

Yorgun, kirli ve umutsuz geçmişim,

Oysa bilmediÄŸin bir ÅŸey var sevgilim,

Ben sende bütün aşklarımı temize çektim.
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But there's something you don't know my love
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Английский

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Язык, на который нужно перевести: Английский

My tired, dirty and hopeless past

Was lying between us like a dead snake

But there's something you don't know my love,

I redeemed from my former loves through you.
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19 Май 2010 13:36

lilian canale
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Hi peabody,

There's just one verb which sounds weird: "cleaned". What do you mean by that?

21 Май 2010 16:30

lilian canale
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Hi Turkish experts,
Could you check that "I cleaned all my loves for you."
It doesn't make sense to me

CC: Sunnybebek cheesecake minuet

22 Май 2010 11:35

minuet
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Literally, it means "I made a clean/fair copy of all my previous loves with you". It may mean "I forgot/overcome all my previous loves with you".

22 Май 2010 13:14

lilian canale
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What about: "You made me forget all my former loves" or " I forgot all my former loves because of you"?
Does any of them convey the original?

22 Май 2010 15:07

minuet
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Yes, I think both of them do.

22 Май 2010 16:37

aydin1
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"temize çektim" is not "make me forget"

22 Май 2010 19:31

lilian canale
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Hi aydin,

Sometimes we have to use different words or a more common expression in order to sound natural in English (as long as the meaning doesn't change, of course).
Do you think that choice does not convey the meaning of the original?

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22 Май 2010 20:15

merdogan
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It is for me;

It was lying between us like a dead snake,
my tired, dirty and hopeless past.

But there's something you don't know my love,
You made me forget all my former loves.

23 Май 2010 15:50

User10
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temize çekmek-> to engross, to transcribe clearly and correctly.

Lit: I transcribed clearly on you all my former loves->(mean.)With you I correct (remedy) the mistakes I made/the bad experiences I had with my former loves, or something like that...

23 Май 2010 15:57

lilian canale
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Hum...perhaps:

"I redeemed from my former loves through you"

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23 Май 2010 16:55

aydin1
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Perhaps "clean slate" can be used. It conveys the literal Turkish "clean" while meaning to make a new copy free of mistakes.

23 Май 2010 17:23

User10
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I agree with Lilian's suggestion, I think "I redeemed from my former loves through you" is the closest possible.

23 Май 2010 19:10

lilian canale
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Hi Aydin,

Do you mean "I wiped the slate clean for you (because of you)"?

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23 Май 2010 20:15

merdogan
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It is , "I forget all my former loves because of you".

27 Май 2010 14:51

peabody
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"I forgot all my ex-relationships"... (love esperiences.. etc?)