Tłumaczenie - Polski-Francuski - Na przyszÅ‚ość platonicznÄ…...

Thanks, Lene, for the traslation!
I just wanted to say that the first line is missing.
You haven't translated: "For a platonic future..." (a tittle).

Sorry Aneta. have edited.

It's a very, very beautiful poem. It really touched me.

Thank you, Lene! And it sounds magnificent in French (to me).
One question: Is it possible to make the last line shorter?

I know English line is a long one too, but Polish is pretty short as you see. I think it would be ok if we wrote:

"throughout the winter of our living BESIDE"
(this is actually what the Polish line says)

Hi Aneta,

I noticed the English version was evaluated 2 years ago and apparently at that time we didn't try to make the last line shorter. Do you want me to do it now so that the next languages to be translated will not have the same problem?

If so...what about:
"all over the winter living beside"?

Hi Lilly,

Yes, it would fit perfectly here.
Thank you for your help and watchfulness.

BTW. I'm sorry it seems I became more demanding after these two years.

Done!

I edited the French version accordingly (shortening last line)

côte à côte! Super!

I just wanted to point out that in the expression "winter living" the "winter" is an adjective for "living" ...

Thank you very much, Lene, Lilly and Francky - the best team ever!