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Hi miss, nice poem!

"He touched the forbidden skin of the beloved"

This line is a little longer than the others. Could it be:
"He felt his beloved's forbidden skin" with no change in the original meaning?

(Not much shorter, but...)

Of course we can, I do it.
Haram means forbidden by religion, so I have translated as forbidden, do you know a shorter word to express that?

for "forbidden" , there isn't a shorter synonym, the only one is "banned" but it usually refers to the law.

yar tenine haram deÄŸdi - could it be "beloved's body became haram (forbidden)? Thanks.