Traducción - Polaco-Portugués brasileño - SERCE MI KRWAWI

Rodrigues, ma come fai a sapere il polacco?

This is bonta's translation to be evalueted:

My heart is bleeding when I hear your so meaningful and loud silence.

A colegue at my work is polish and he traduzed it for me in german, I wrote from it the portuguese text.

I don't agree wih the translation made for portuguese, perhaps one better would be: "O meu coracao sangra quando oico o teu silencio significativo e barulhento"...
I wish this one would help you make a better translation...

It's not so hard to find polish speakers in Brazil,nava.It's the third or fourth greatest number of imigrants here in the south (my wife's a good example: Unicki).
The translation, comparated with the english one, is very good.