Tercüme - Türkçe-İngilizce - 2 sene sonra üniversite okuyacağım.üniversiteyi...

The English looks good
I have set a poll.

Some problems with the translation.

First of all, the context tells us that the author will go to university in two years time, or two years from now. Two years later doesn't work here because the reader won't know what the "later" is in reference to.

Another obvious mistake: "please promise to make the introduction". Not only does this sound unnatural in English; it's also a mistranslation of the source text. This should be "please promise to meet me".

I'd also change the "we always stand behind you" to a more natural-sounding "we're always behind you", or "we'll always support you", etc. Also- "cute" is better than "sweet" here, I think.

Thanks iyyavor
Rollingmaster, do you agree aith iyyavor's comments?

Yes, I agree.

I would like to ask something; does "please promise to make the introduction" have a different meaning?

'Please promise to make the introduction' sounds like you ask someone to introduce you to someone else

Thank you, I will make the edits in the translation

Thank you, Lein.