Oversættelse - Spansk-Engelsk - El dolor me angústia

Lillian,

Please work on this and revise the translation. There are still parts of it that don't make any sense in English.

Best

David

They don't make sense in Spanish either, sorry.

I did my best.

I wouldn't take away the apostroph Lilian, the speaker is actually speaking to his mouth: "Os meum, voca Omnipotentem!"
On the other hand, your translation is more fluent than "Mouth, call for the Almighty!"

EDIT: this was my try, maybe it can help.
"Pain weighs down on me, torture oppresses me. My pale face turns yellow because of my mind.
My mouth, call for the Omnipotent and for the crowd to applause. Ah, does he ask to see me, miserable, in a cruel bite?"