翻译 - 英语-拉丁语 - Don't let the past dictate who you ...

Please, alexfatt, rewrite your text using lower case.

Hello again!

Noli permittere + dativus

exercere imperium in essentiam tuam --> it doesn't convey the source. Think it over again, please.

praesens --> tempus praesens/ tempora tua/ praesentia

Alexfatt, correct your translation, please or I will reject your translation.

I'm going to submit right now only one translation. I hope it works.

No you don't have to. You should only read your notifications that you receive on your e-mail. That's all.

Hey, why did you make one sentence of two?

Because they are very similar in meaning, I'd think one translation would satisfy both. Should I submit two different translation like at first?

Yes you should. They differ after all. Don't worry. You have time...

What about
"Noli permittere tempori praeterito statuere animum tuum." for the first one and
"Noli permittere tempori praeterito exstinguere tempus praesens." for the second one?

"statuere animum tuum" means "to force your soul/spirit" or "to impose your soul/spirit"

Meanwhile we have here: "dictate who you are"

=statuere/obtrudere qui es

The second one is fine. I'd change only the order a bit:
exstinguere tempus praesens --> tempus praesens exstinguere

Do you agree?

and don't forget aboout "or" between them.

Right, sometimes the literal translation suits better.

I will take care about "or"

Haha! But "or" should be also in Latin!

Really?

Oh yes! We have to translate everything what was put into the translation field. You don't have to translate only titles and remarks under translations.

Ops, sorry!

Now it is perfect, I will accept it without rating this time.

OK, it must be said that this one was OUR translation. Thank you for helping, I promise I'll do better translations!

I'm glad I could cooperate with you today.
You translate really well. This one was just a lesson of making translations on for you... Good luck in the future!