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Aphorisme 48
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Denke nicht an das,
was dir misslungen ist.
Das macht traurig.
Denke an das,
was dir gelungen ist,
das macht froh.
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Titel
Aphorism 48
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Engelsk

Oversat af sagittarius
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Don't think about
what you missed.
This makes sad.
Think about
what you achieved.
This makes happy.
Senest valideret eller redigeret af lilian canale - 2 Marts 2009 12:07





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1 Marts 2009 17:15

lilian canale
Antal indlæg: 14972
Hi sagittarius,
I think it would sound better and more correct:

failed ---> missed
succeeded ---> achieved

What do you think?

1 Marts 2009 19:18

sagittarius
Antal indlæg: 118
Hi, lilian!

I think "missed" is OK. But I left out "in" with succeeded: it should be "succeeded in". What do you think?

1 Marts 2009 21:12

lilian canale
Antal indlæg: 14972
"achieved" is better and doesn't need a preposition.

1 Marts 2009 21:33

sagittarius
Antal indlæg: 118
OK. I'll change it to "achieved". Thanks for your suggestion.

1 Marts 2009 21:37

lilian canale
Antal indlæg: 14972
OK, it's at the poll now, therefore no more edits.

1 Marts 2009 22:24

Maybe:-)
Antal indlæg: 338
Per essere assolutamente fedele al testo originale, si potrebbe forse omettere "you" e sostituire "it" con "this" nella quartultima e nell'ultima riga. Si avrebbe quindi "this makes sad" e "this makes glad"

1 Marts 2009 23:48

Francky5591
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- "...what you missed"

- "...what you achieved"

1 Marts 2009 23:56

lilian canale
Antal indlæg: 14972
Hi sagittarius, according to the suggestions the lines should read:


Don't think about
what you (have) missed.
That brings sadness.
Think about
what you (have) achieved.
That brings happiness.


I think the use of the present perfect is more suitable, however the simple past can be used too.

Do you agree with this version?


2 Marts 2009 07:30

Tzicu-Sem
Antal indlæg: 493
"It shall make you sad";
"It shall make you happy".

2 Marts 2009 08:47

3mend0
Antal indlæg: 49
Non pensare a ciò che hai perso.
Questo rattrista.
Pensa a ciò che ti è riuscito. Questo rende felici.

2 Marts 2009 11:04

itsatrap100
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ist misslungen = has been unsuccessful
gelingen, ant. of misslingen = successful

2 Marts 2009 11:08

sagittarius
Antal indlæg: 118
OK. Let yours version be the best!