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Cuvam te, ne dam nikom da te dira na dlanu si...
Tekst
Podnet od Gil Ribeiro
Izvorni jezik: Srpski

Cuvam te, ne dam
nikom da te dira
na dlanu si
moja tajna urezana

Cuvam te, gde god
krenem imam te
na dlanu si ti moja
linija zivota, ljubavi


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Natpis
Watching over you...
Prevod
Engleski

Preveo NPazarka
Željeni jezik: Engleski

I'm watching over you, I won't let
anyone else touch you
On the palm of my hand
You're my engraved secret

I'm watching over you, wherever,
I go, I've got you
On the palm of my hand
You're my lifeline, my love
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I'm watching over you, I won't let anyone else touch you
You're the engraved secret on the palm of my hand

I'm watching over you, wherever I go, I've got you
You're the lifeline on the palm of my hand, my love
Poslednja provera i obrada od lilian canale - 30 Maj 2008 03:06





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23 Maj 2008 00:01

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
Hi NPazarka,

It seems to be a poem, therefore I think we should keep the lines the way they are in the original.
Would you edit mantaining the length of the lines, please?

23 Maj 2008 00:10

Dren
Broj poruka: 21
Lilian,

NPazarka did an excellent job. If you keep the length of lines the same translation might loose it's original meaning.

Cheers

23 Maj 2008 00:34

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
Sure, she did a great job!
However when translating poetry we have to make an effort in order to create a poem in the target language as well. Sometimes we need to change the original words to get some rhyme (if the original has it).
It's quite difficult getting a good translation from a word-by-word work.
What is important is keeping the meaning.
I don't think this translation would be "harmed" if we try to make it look like a poem.

My suggestion:

I'm watching over you,
nobody else will touch you
On the palm of my hand
You're my engraved secret

I'm watching over you,
wherever I go you are
On the palm of my hand
You're my lifeline.

my love


23 Maj 2008 00:35

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
Oops! forgot to cc you.

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