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559अनुबाद - अंग्रेजी-स्पेनी - Each small candle

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यो हरफ निम्न भाषामा उपलब्ध छ: अंग्रेजीजर्मनइतालियनब्राजिलियन पर्तुगिज  पोर्तुगालीतुर्केलीचीनीयाफ्रान्सेलीयुनानेलीसरबियनस्पेनीडेनिसहन्गेरियनचिनीया (सरल)अरबीयहुदीडचपोलिसरूसीUkrainianBulgarianरोमानियनअल्बेनियनस्विडेनीनर्वेजियनफिनल्यान्डीचेकBosnianक्रोएसियनPersian languageजापानीस्लोभाकLatinकोरियनलिथुएनियनक्लिनगन
अनुरोध गरिएका अनुबादहरु: Literary Chinese

Category Song

This translation request is "Meaning only".
शीर्षक
Each small candle
हरफ
Rumoद्वारा बुझाइएको
स्रोत भाषा: अंग्रेजी

Not the torturer will scare me
Nor the body's final fall
Nor the barrels of death's rifles
Nor the shadows on the wall
Nor the night when to the ground
The last dim star of pain is hurled
But the blind indifference
Of a merciless unfeeling world

And each small candle
Lights a corner of the dark...
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी
From a song by Roger Waters
Source: http://www.roger-waters.com/candle.html

Please keep sense and meaning, translations have not necessarily got to be as poetical (but if you have nice lyrical ideas, don't hesitate to use them).^^





शीर्षक
Cada pequeña vela
अनुबाद
स्पेनी

acuarioद्वारा अनुबाद गरिएको
अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने भाषा: स्पेनी

Ni el torturador me asustará
Ni la caída final del cuerpo
Ni los cañones de los rifles de la muerte
Ni las sombras en el muro
Ni la noche, cuando al suelo
Sea arrojada la última leve estrella de dolor.
Sino la ciega indiferencia
De un mundo cruel y sin piedad

Y cada pequeña vela
Ilumina un rincón de la oscuridad
Validated by Lev van Pelt - 2012年 जुलाई 10日 10:33





पछिल्ला सन्देशहरु

लेखक
सन्देश

2007年 जुन 26日 16:27

indiangirl
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1
hej älskling hur mår du? vad gör du varför har du inte på din mobil för hur ska jag kunna få tag på dig? var är du nu snälla kan du komma in på msn igen....? jag saknar dig jätte mycket jag vill ha dig här hos mig nu:s puss o kram

2007年 जुन 27日 04:59

cucumis
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 3785
Sorry can you translate your message in english ?

2008年 मे 20日 20:50

KULELİ
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1
coma esta

2012年 जुन 20日 21:00

Lev van Pelt
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 313
The published translation of this song into Spanish (4 years ago, as I notice!) has several mistakes; a couple of them really serious -unacceptable in my opinion-. Moreover this is a favourite text.
So, I propose here a corrected version:

Ni el torturador me asustará
Ni la caída final del cuerpo
Ni los cañones de los rifles de la muerte
Ni las sombras en el muro
Ni la noche, cuando al suelo
Sea arrojada la última leve estrella de dolor
Sino la ciega indiferencia
De un mundo cruel y sin piedad

Y cada pequeña vela
Ilumina un rincón de la oscuridad...

2012年 जुन 20日 23:30

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12370
Thanks Lev van Pelt, I'll forward your remark to a Spanish native speaker

Hi Lilian, what should we do here, should we switch with Lev's version

Thanks!

CC: lilian canale

2012年 जुन 21日 00:35

Lev van Pelt
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 313
Hi again, Francky5591!

Thanks for your response on this subject as well.
I just want to remark than I am in fact(from my very birth, or not much afterwards :-) a native Spanish speaker, being born near Barcelona, from Spanish parents...

2012年 जुन 21日 00:31

Lev van Pelt
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 313
And I want to clarify that I am ALSO a native Catalan speaker (we are usually bilingual in my little Country with no state :-/

Thanks indeed for your kind attention,

Lev

2012年 जुन 21日 00:36

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12370
Yes, I could see on your profile that you were Spanish, what I meant but forgot to mention was "a Spanish native speaker with a monkey-wrench" (an admin here has got a monkey-wrench under her/his avatar)

2012年 जुन 21日 00:46

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12370
You're welcome Lev! Cheer up Catalunya!


2012年 जुन 21日 01:09

Lev van Pelt
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 313
Of course!
I understood this just a few seconds after having posted my messages.
Anyway, going back to the published translation of this lyrics by Roger Waters, I must recommend with strength its revision; or even removal, given the flagrant errors that it contains.
(I've seen that the translator is from Spain, and I have no doubts that she knows Spanish; but neither have I any doubt that she did not read well the original.)

2012年 जुन 21日 01:44

Lev van Pelt
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 313
I've arrived a little bit late with my last answer, Francky. You have anticipated with your welcome, and your "Cheer up Catalunya (well written with "ny"!!)
I feel very grateful and impressed by this. I can assure you.
Many many thanks.

(And "Vive La France !" :-))

2012年 जुन 21日 01:03

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12370
I believe you're right lev, no doubt on it!
That will certainly be confirmed by Lilian, and we'll switch with the version you gave.


2012年 जुन 21日 01:21

Francky5591
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 12370
Our messages cross all the time!

I wish you a good night, Lev, I'll log out now.

Cheers!

2012年 जुन 21日 01:30

lilian canale
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972
Hi guys,

Yes, in fact Lev van Pelt is right about this translation. I was not part of the team at that time and I honestly can't understand why this version was accepted.
I'll reject it and give Lev van Pelt the chance of doing a better job

Thanks both for your vigilance.