Cucumis - Ókeypis álinju umsetingar tænasta



559Umseting - Enskt-Spanskt - Each small candle

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Umbidnar umsetingar: Literary Chinese

Bólkur Songur

Hendan umbidna umseting er "Bert meining".
Heiti
Each small candle
Tekstur
Framborið av Rumo
Uppruna mál: Enskt

Not the torturer will scare me
Nor the body's final fall
Nor the barrels of death's rifles
Nor the shadows on the wall
Nor the night when to the ground
The last dim star of pain is hurled
But the blind indifference
Of a merciless unfeeling world

And each small candle
Lights a corner of the dark...
Viðmerking um umsetingina
From a song by Roger Waters
Source: http://www.roger-waters.com/candle.html

Please keep sense and meaning, translations have not necessarily got to be as poetical (but if you have nice lyrical ideas, don't hesitate to use them).^^





Heiti
Cada pequeña vela
Umseting
Spanskt

Umsett av acuario
Ynskt mál: Spanskt

Ni el torturador me asustará
Ni la caída final del cuerpo
Ni los cañones de los rifles de la muerte
Ni las sombras en el muro
Ni la noche, cuando al suelo
Sea arrojada la última leve estrella de dolor.
Sino la ciega indiferencia
De un mundo cruel y sin piedad

Y cada pequeña vela
Ilumina un rincón de la oscuridad
Góðkent av Lev van Pelt - 10 Juli 2012 10:33





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26 Juni 2007 16:27

indiangirl
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hej älskling hur mår du? vad gör du varför har du inte på din mobil för hur ska jag kunna få tag på dig? var är du nu snälla kan du komma in på msn igen....? jag saknar dig jätte mycket jag vill ha dig här hos mig nu:s puss o kram

27 Juni 2007 04:59

cucumis
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Sorry can you translate your message in english ?

20 Mai 2008 20:50

KULELİ
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coma esta

20 Juni 2012 21:00

Lev van Pelt
Tal av boðum: 313
The published translation of this song into Spanish (4 years ago, as I notice!) has several mistakes; a couple of them really serious -unacceptable in my opinion-. Moreover this is a favourite text.
So, I propose here a corrected version:

Ni el torturador me asustará
Ni la caída final del cuerpo
Ni los cañones de los rifles de la muerte
Ni las sombras en el muro
Ni la noche, cuando al suelo
Sea arrojada la última leve estrella de dolor
Sino la ciega indiferencia
De un mundo cruel y sin piedad

Y cada pequeña vela
Ilumina un rincón de la oscuridad...

20 Juni 2012 23:30

Francky5591
Tal av boðum: 12370
Thanks Lev van Pelt, I'll forward your remark to a Spanish native speaker

Hi Lilian, what should we do here, should we switch with Lev's version

Thanks!

CC: lilian canale

21 Juni 2012 00:35

Lev van Pelt
Tal av boðum: 313
Hi again, Francky5591!

Thanks for your response on this subject as well.
I just want to remark than I am in fact(from my very birth, or not much afterwards :-) a native Spanish speaker, being born near Barcelona, from Spanish parents...

21 Juni 2012 00:31

Lev van Pelt
Tal av boðum: 313
And I want to clarify that I am ALSO a native Catalan speaker (we are usually bilingual in my little Country with no state :-/

Thanks indeed for your kind attention,

Lev

21 Juni 2012 00:36

Francky5591
Tal av boðum: 12370
Yes, I could see on your profile that you were Spanish, what I meant but forgot to mention was "a Spanish native speaker with a monkey-wrench" (an admin here has got a monkey-wrench under her/his avatar)

21 Juni 2012 00:46

Francky5591
Tal av boðum: 12370
You're welcome Lev! Cheer up Catalunya!


21 Juni 2012 01:09

Lev van Pelt
Tal av boðum: 313
Of course!
I understood this just a few seconds after having posted my messages.
Anyway, going back to the published translation of this lyrics by Roger Waters, I must recommend with strength its revision; or even removal, given the flagrant errors that it contains.
(I've seen that the translator is from Spain, and I have no doubts that she knows Spanish; but neither have I any doubt that she did not read well the original.)

21 Juni 2012 01:44

Lev van Pelt
Tal av boðum: 313
I've arrived a little bit late with my last answer, Francky. You have anticipated with your welcome, and your "Cheer up Catalunya (well written with "ny"!!)
I feel very grateful and impressed by this. I can assure you.
Many many thanks.

(And "Vive La France !" :-))

21 Juni 2012 01:03

Francky5591
Tal av boðum: 12370
I believe you're right lev, no doubt on it!
That will certainly be confirmed by Lilian, and we'll switch with the version you gave.


21 Juni 2012 01:21

Francky5591
Tal av boðum: 12370
Our messages cross all the time!

I wish you a good night, Lev, I'll log out now.

Cheers!

21 Juni 2012 01:30

lilian canale
Tal av boðum: 14972
Hi guys,

Yes, in fact Lev van Pelt is right about this translation. I was not part of the team at that time and I honestly can't understand why this version was accepted.
I'll reject it and give Lev van Pelt the chance of doing a better job

Thanks both for your vigilance.