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48अनुबाद - रोमानियन-अंग्रेजी - poezie de iubire

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यो हरफ निम्न भाषामा उपलब्ध छ: रोमानियनअंग्रेजीरूसी

Category Literature - Arts / Creation / Imagination

शीर्षक
poezie de iubire
हरफ
MÃ¥ddieद्वारा बुझाइएको
स्रोत भाषा: रोमानियन

ÃŽÅ¢I SPUN...

ÃŽÅ£i spun...
Dacă
M-ai săruta pe obraz,
M-aş spăla,
Cu băgare de seamă
De teamă
Să nu tulbur
Limpezimea sărutului tău...

ÃŽÅ£i spun...
Dacă
M-ai mîngîia pe creştet,
M-aş pieptăna
Cu băgare de seamă
De teamă
Să nu-ntin
Mireasma atingerii tale...

ÃŽÅ£i spun...
Dacă
Mi-ai şopti că mă iubeşti,
AÅŸ respira
Cu băgare de seamă
De teamă
Să nu risipesc
Vraja ÅŸoaptelor tale...
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी
doresc sa traduceti acest poem in asa fel incit mesajul sa ramina nealterat chiar daca forma sufera unele mici modificari.multumesc

शीर्षक
Love poem
अनुबाद
अंग्रेजी

MÃ¥ddieद्वारा अनुबाद गरिएको
अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने भाषा: अंग्रेजी

I’m telling you...
If
You kissed me on my cheek
I would wash carefully
For fear
Of disturbing
The clarity of your kiss…

I’m telling you...
If
You caressed the top of my head,
I would comb
Carefully
For fear
Of staining
The scent of your touch

I’m telling you...
If
You whispered you loved me
I would breath
Carefully
For fear
Of scattering
The spell
Of your whispers...
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी
Hope this will help. I have seen this text is waiting for a translation for some time and maybe it will be easier with a bridge in English.
Validated by lilian canale - 2008年 मे 17日 15:53





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लेखक
सन्देश

2008年 मे 16日 22:52

lilian canale
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972
Hi Madeleine,

This must be a really nice text, I say "must be" trusting your excellent version in English.
I just suggest a small change in structure:
when you say "for fear not to disturb" I would rather say: "for fear of diturbing" and the same, every time this words appear.

What do you think?

2008年 मे 17日 10:50

MÃ¥ddie
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1285
Hi Lilian,

I'll change it. And in my opinion, yes, it is a very nice poem

Madeleine