Translation - Turkish-English - DAYAN GÖNLÜMCurrent status Translation
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DAYAN GÖNLÜM |
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Translated by  kfeto | Target language: English
ENDURE, MY HEART | Remarks about the translation | |
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Last validated or edited by lilian canale - 24 October 2008 12:40
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23 October 2008 21:19 | | | hi kfeto
I think it would be better with the verb "to hold on" rather than "to endure"
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24 October 2008 12:25 | | 
kfetoNumber of messages: 953 | hold on works too, yes, Silkworm
in fact it would elimate the need for the comma even
but i feel endure is more... 'poetic'?
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24 October 2008 19:11 | | | hmmm I felt just the opposite,  found "to hold on " more sentimental ... but it has already been approved |
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