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10Tłumaczenie - Turecki-Angielski - hep seni bekledim bir türlü gelmeyen

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Tytuł
hep seni bekledim bir türlü gelmeyen
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Wprowadzone przez kagan
Język źródłowy: Turecki

Delikanlı yüreklerin çılgın vuruşlarında
Gençliğimle o cömert aynalarda
İlkyazların alabildiğine hür güzelliğinden

Tytuł
I waited and waited for you but you didn't come
Tłumaczenie
Angielski

Tłumaczone przez kafetzou
Język docelowy: Angielski

At the crazy beat of hot-blooded youths' hearts
In those generous mirrors with my youthfulness
From the totally free beauty of those first summers
Ostatnio zatwierdzony albo edytowany przez lilian canale - 28 Sierpień 2008 04:06





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15 Sierpień 2008 08:13

serba
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couldn't it be "you" instead of "they"

devamı olarak da düşünsen orada they yok yoksa ben mi göremiyorum.

gelmeyen kiÅŸi hayali bir sevgili ya da beklediÄŸi belli bir kiÅŸi

21 Sierpień 2008 07:15

serba
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hep seni bekledim bir türlü gelmeyen = hep seni bekledim "SEN" bir türlü gelmedin


where is "they" here??

21 Sierpień 2008 19:31

buketnur
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Merhaba Kafetzou,
"İlkyaz" "bahar" anlamına gelir.

22 Sierpień 2008 07:49

kafetzou
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Her zaman öyle mi buketnur? "İlk yaz" anlamına gelemez mi?

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23 Sierpień 2008 17:52

kafetzou
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Lilian, Tantine, or Ian, can you do an evaluation of this one?

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23 Sierpień 2008 17:55

lilian canale
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Hi Kafetzou,

If all those comments were in English evaluating would be a bit easier...

23 Sierpień 2008 18:10

kafetzou
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Good point.

Serba was worried about my translation of the title, which I had taken to be connected to the rest, but he pointed out that it might not be. I didn't change anything there.

Buketnur pointed out that "ilkyaz", which literally means "first summer", actually means "spring". I asked if it could mean "first summer" metaphorically, as in "first time someone experienced love", but she said it couldn't, so I changed it.

23 Sierpień 2008 18:11

kafetzou
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Actually, I just noticed serba's last note, and I'm going to change the title accordingly - there was a form I had misunderstood there.

23 Sierpień 2008 18:11

kfeto
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i interpreted the first line like serba too
last line something like: from what the springs could take of your free beauty

23 Sierpień 2008 18:14

kafetzou
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Apparently "alabildiÄŸine" is an adverb that means "totally" - I didn't know it either.

23 Sierpień 2008 18:16

kfeto
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ha ok, thanks kafetzou

23 Sierpień 2008 21:19

merdogan
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to be "delikanlı" is not only for men . "youngster" can be better instate of "young men's hearts".
and
"ilk yazlar" means here "the first love"

23 Sierpień 2008 22:48

merdogan
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the meaning is not O.K

26 Sierpień 2008 07:59

serba
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by the way using "first summer" instead of "spring" for the word "ilk yaz" would be more poetic.

26 Sierpień 2008 08:02

serba
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bence ilk yaz first summer olarak kalmalı.

ilk yaz=ilkbahar=first summer= spring

ancak ilk yaz ve first summer kelimeleri şiir için daha uygun bence..

27 Sierpień 2008 06:18

kafetzou
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OK - I changed "Springs" back to "first summers", and changed my translation of "delikanli" to "hot-blooded youths".

27 Sierpień 2008 15:54

lilian canale
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Everyone happy now?

May I validate it?

27 Sierpień 2008 17:06

kafetzou
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merdogan and serba, is it OK now?

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29 Sierpień 2008 07:23

serba
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I already voted for it

29 Sierpień 2008 07:30

kafetzou
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Thanks!

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