Cucumis - Ókeypis álinju umsetingar tænasta
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Umseting - Franskt-Enskt - Gloria tu manques dans l'air

Núverðandi støðaUmseting
Hesin teksturin er tøkur í fylgjandi málum: ItalsktFransktEnskt

Bólkur Songur - Kærleiki / Vinskapur

Heiti
Gloria tu manques dans l'air
Tekstur
Framborið av Herpoelaert
Uppruna mál: Franskt Umsett av Sturel

Gloria, dans l'air, tu me manques,
tu manques à une main qui travaille lentement,
tu manques à cette bouche qui ne touche plus à la nourriture,
et toujours cette histoire, qu'elle, je l'appelle Gloria.
Gloria sur tes flancs le matin naît le soleil,
il entre de la haine et sort de l'amour du nom Gloria.

Heiti
Glory
Umseting
Enskt

Umsett av Tantine
Ynskt mál: Enskt

Glory, you are absent in the air,
The hand that slowly worked is spare,
My lips, which yours no longer meet,
All nourishment refuse to eat,
And always, there is this story,
In which I ever call you Glory
The sun arises on your sides,
Hate penetrates, then love presides,
In the name of Glory
Viðmerking um umsetingina
In order to rime well, I translated Gloria itself into English.
Góðkent av kafetzou - 15 Juni 2007 08:08





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14 Juni 2007 16:31

kafetzou
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This is amazing, Tantine - I can't believe you made it rhyme!

Can you think of an alternative phrase to "I now give a miss"? I'm not sure that would be understood.

How about, "A mouth which yours no longer greets,
thinks of you and no longer eats"? It's not great; can you work with it?

14 Juni 2007 17:40

Tantine
Tal av boðum: 2747
Hi Kafetzou,

I love translating poetry and getting it to rhyme!

This turn of phrase didn't please me too much either, even though it rhymed well. Its a little too "precious" for the general tone.

How about:

My lips, which yours no longer meet,
All nourrishment refuse to eat

If not, your own suggestion is a good itself itself and would suit me fine.

Bises
Tantine

15 Juni 2007 08:07

kafetzou
Tal av boðum: 7963
Oh yes - this is much better! I'll edit it and accept it.