Tłumaczenie - Włoski-Angielski - SAI FORSE LA COSA, CHE NON TI FA SMETTERE DI...

Lilly, I made the new version. Hope now it's not faulted.

OK Guzel, let's see...I'll do it this time so that you understand what I call a "faulty" text.

The first line for example should be:
"Do you know what perhaps prevents you from stopping thinking of me?"

you did all ---> you've done everything

you devided all into the good and the bad---> you managed all in good and evil

by your person ---> by you as a person

delighted everything ---> delighted by everything

The emotions,that are difficult to forget. ---> Emotions, difficult/hard to forget

Anyway I'd like to continue hearing you by the way. ----> I'd like to continue hearing from you, though.

Don't you think those are too many corrections in such a short text?

I'm sorry.

Don't be sad.
We learn something new everyday.
I just want you to know that if I ever reject a translation is because it would really need a lot of work, OK?

I hate doing that, but regarding the number of translations I have to evaluate I couldn't discuss so many corrections with each translator. See what I mean?

Si, hai ragione.