Oversættelse - Hebraisk-Fransk - מצודת שלה ברבאט היא אדריכלות ביצורים נאה

Hello speak up, please could you tell why you think this translation is wrong? Thanks a lot!

there are mistakes in the hebrew text, and I don't know where does the text come from,also my translation gives the general meaning of the text. Secondly I'm only student in hebrew also I can't tell my translation is perfectly true.

I did a few Hebrew myself, but I must say not enough to find out the meaning, as my level must be much lower than yours, all I can read is "shela baRabat hi..."! (LOL!)is the first word "fortifications"(matsadot or "matzadot?)

in fact, it's : the citadel of Rabat is, as for the architechture of his fortifications, beautiful.

Well my French is not that good at all, but I can understand a little bit, and though the translation is nice - it's a bit unfaithful to the Hebrew text.

It's not "Shela" (hers), cause it makes no sense. It is probably "Shilo", which is written the same (he's the third son of bibical Judah), though I have never heard of his fortress, and quite sure there isn't any.

The first word, Metzadot, means: "Fortresses".

I've translated it to English.