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번역 - 영어-프랑스어 - The child spirit,hidden under a ...현재 상황 번역
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The child spirit,hidden under a thousand and one grey City wrappings bursts its bonds.
Valleys,lit with the swaying light of broom blossom,in the distance,grey whares,with a light petticoat frill of a garden,creeping round them on a white road once a procession of patient cattle. A shivering mass of white native blossom,a tree touched with scarlet,a clump of toi–toi,and looking for all the world like a family of little girls drying their hair. | | some informations about some words from this text :
"toi-toi" is a plant very diffuse in New Zealand;
"whares" are places of meeting in New Zealand also know as "marae". |
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L'esprit de l'enfant, caché sous mille et un emballages de ville grise rompt ses liens.
Des vallées, illuminées par la lumière se balançant des fleurs de genêt, au loin, des maraes gris, avec le volant d'un jupon léger d'un jardin, et se faufilant autour d'elles sur une route blanche une procession de bétail patient. Une masse frissonnante d'une fleur indigène blanche, un arbre avec une touche d'écarlate, un bouquet de toi-toi, et en cherchant le monde entier comme une famille de petites filles séchant leurs cheveux. |
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Francky5591 에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2008년 6월 23일 01:45
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2008년 6월 23일 12:38 | | | Merci pour la correction Francky (c'était drying et pas dying). | | |
2008년 6월 23일 13:18 | | | | | |
2008년 6월 28일 22:19 | | | Is it right to translate "The child spirit" into "L'esprit de l'enfant"?
The text puts child as an adjective for spirit, a "spirit of child", like a wild/innocent/joker one, not "of the child", belonging to a child. CC: Botica Francky5591 | | |
2008년 6월 29일 00:55 | | | I see what you mean, it would be translated by "l'esprit d'enfant", I've been thinking to that possibility of translation as well...
What do you think about this way to translate "the child spirit", Botica? CC: Botica | | |
2008년 6월 29일 21:26 | | | I think it would better to say : l'esprit enfant. |
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Je ne sais pas si tu l'as vue, mais hier après-midi, j'avais posté une version assez bâclée de ce texte, aussi je me suis dépêché, après avoir lu ta traduction, de l'effacer de sous la version anglaise...) 
