Μετάφραση - Ελληνικά-Αγγλικά - Τα μάτια σου λάμπουν όταν με κοιτάς. Σου αξίζει....

I think that "Δεν πρόκειται να σε αφήσω να μου φύγεις" is not correctly translated in English. The meaning is "I will never let you go". I don't know how native English speakers would translate that. Moreover, I think "Μαζί σου μπορώ να κλαίω,να μην ντρέπομαι, να μην φοβάμαι", translated by "I am able to cry" is not correct." It is not a question of "being able to" but of "allowing oneself to" cry. Last, "to not be ashamed" is not correct. Native English speakers, please help!

Your eyes shine when you look at me.You deserved it.I'm not going to let you leave me.I can cry with you,I can't be ashamed,I can't be afraid.I need you more and more every day,and I 'll do anything so everybody realise it.

Δεν πρόκειται να σε αφήσω να μου φύγεις. = I'll never let you leave me.

The rest of it is fine.