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10תרגום - סרבית-אנגלית - Ako me volis Ako me zaista volis...

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הטקסט נגיש בשפות הבאות: סרביתאנגליתפולנית

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שם
Ako me volis Ako me zaista volis...
טקסט
נשלח על ידי Aleksandra Nikolic
שפת המקור: סרבית

Ako me volis
Ako me zaista volis
zasto me onda ne uvedes u svoje snove
i zasto vrata ne zakljucas
zasto ne ostavis poruku svetu
da ni za koga nisi kod kuce?

Ako me volis
zasto od mene krades svoje najlepse vreme
zasto gledas u sat na ruci
zasto se konacno ne okrenes
kazaljkama mojih zelja
zasto ne ostanes?



Ako me volis
zasto pristajes na tudja pravila igre
zasto me varas danima praznim
zasto bez mene odlazis igde
zasto ne ostanes?
הערות לגבי התרגום
zelim prevod pesme na engleski(britanski)

שם
If you love me, if you really love me...
תרגום
אנגלית

תורגם על ידי Roller-Coaster
שפת המטרה: אנגלית

If you love me,
If you really love me,
Why don't you let me into your dreams,
And why don't you lock the door?
Why don't you leave a message to the world,
That you're not at home for anyone?

If you love me,
Why are you stealing from me your best time?
Why are you looking at a watch on your hand?
Why don't you, finally, turn back,
With the hands of my wishes?
Why don't you stay?

If you love me,
Why are you accepting the others' game rules?
Why are you cheating on me with hollow days,
Why are you leaving without me,
Why don't you stay?
הערות לגבי התרגום
I have a problem with "needles", "watch hand", "pointers" (part of a clock which shows time). I must admit I never used that word before... Any help would be appreciated, thank you!
אושר לאחרונה ע"י lilian canale - 13 מאי 2008 04:01





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12 מאי 2008 03:06

lilian canale
מספר הודעות: 14972
Hi Bojana,
The English looks fine.

That "clock" should be "watch" since it is in his hand not in the wall.

The needles which point the time are really the "hands" of the watch.
Maybe instead of "with pointers of my wishes" it could simply be:
"the hands of my wishes"

others' ------> the others'
a hollow days -----> hollow days

Perhaps we should add some question marks too.

What do you think?

12 מאי 2008 08:24

Roller-Coaster
מספר הודעות: 930
Hey Lili,

I fixed it. Tell me if it is ok now with those question marks?

Thank you!


I like that cat