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Hugann seiða svalli frá Hugann seiða svalli frá...
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gjuha e tekstit origjinal: Islandeze

Hugann seiða svalli frá
sundin, heiði og skörðin;
vona-leið er valin þá
vestur Breiðafjörðinn.

Alt er borið burtu gróm
bæði af Skor og fjöllum,
því að vorið blóm við blóm
breiddi í sporum öllum.

Dægur-halli daggperlum
dreifir vallargróðann;
bjargastalla beltast um
blessuð fjallamóðan.

Þrjóti grið á þessum stað,
þá er lið að skeiðum,
því að hlið er opið að
úthafsmiðum breiðum.
Vërejtje rreth përkthimit
A beautiful song. I don't need to understand the lyrics to know that, but I'm curious.

Titull
The mind enchanted
Përkthime
Anglisht

Perkthyer nga pias
Përkthe në: Anglisht

The mind enchanted by
the strait, the plateau and the mountain pass;
hopefulness is chosen there
westwards Breiðafjörðinn.

Everything is carried away,
mud from grooves and mountains,
because the spring bloom with flowers
spread all over the tracks.

Day conquers the dewdrops
scattered all over the field vegetation;
the mountain flowers grow around
the blessed mountain river.


When there's no mercy upon this place
the crowd will be divided,
because the gate is open to
the wide sea.
Vërejtje rreth përkthimit
Acc. to an Old Icelandic dictionary ”Dægur” should be translated as ”half a day” (could be night or day) but I guess it sounds a bit odd to write so? I wrote “Day” instead.

“úthafsmiðum” = “outerseafisheries”… interpreted it as the wide sea.
U vleresua ose u publikua se fundi nga lilian canale - 20 Shtator 2009 00:34





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17 Shtator 2009 19:43

lilian canale
Numri i postimeve: 14972
Hi Bamsa, could you help me evaluate this translation, it seems it will not get any votes

CC: Bamsa

18 Shtator 2009 01:05

Bamsa
Numri i postimeve: 1524
Hi lilian

Hi pia

Uff.. I'm not so poetic, but you are pia

If I would translate the first verse, I would do it like this:

The mind enchanted by
the strait, heath and pass;
the passage of hope is chosen
westward Breiðafjörðinn.

it seems to be the same as your translation

18 Shtator 2009 01:09

Bamsa
Numri i postimeve: 1524
The second verse:

Everything is carried away, grime
from the grooves and mountains,
because the spring blooms with flowers
spread in all traces.

My English is not one of the best, so there may be some errors to correct.

18 Shtator 2009 01:17

Bamsa
Numri i postimeve: 1524
The third verse:

The day tilt "daypearls"
scattered all over the field vegetation;
the mountain flower grow around
the blessed mountain river.

18 Shtator 2009 01:19

Bamsa
Numri i postimeve: 1524
The fourth verse:

Run out of mercy at this place,
then the crowd will be divided,
because the gate is open to
the wide ocean water.

18 Shtator 2009 10:35

pias
Numri i postimeve: 8113
Thank you for the kind words Ernst... but it seems I’ve misunderstood much. Sorry! I waited a long time before I decided to give this request a try, guess I should have left it for a native to do. Lilian, if it’s easier to reject my translation and let someone else try, please do that!

19 Shtator 2009 23:22

pias
Numri i postimeve: 8113
Not rejected yet

May I try to correct it??

19 Shtator 2009 23:30

lilian canale
Numri i postimeve: 14972
I was waiting for your correction

Then, I suggest that you share the points with Bamsa

19 Shtator 2009 23:37

pias
Numri i postimeve: 8113
Sure!

Ernst,
is it ok. now?

CC: Bamsa

19 Shtator 2009 23:56

Bamsa
Numri i postimeve: 1524
For me it looks fine, Pia Those lyrics can be understood in different ways.

20 Shtator 2009 00:00

pias
Numri i postimeve: 8113
Thanks for the help

CC: Bamsa

20 Shtator 2009 00:23

lilian canale
Numri i postimeve: 14972
I think there's no use in setting a poll, so if you agree I'll accept the translation.

CC: Bamsa

20 Shtator 2009 00:27

Bamsa
Numri i postimeve: 1524
I agree to accept it

20 Shtator 2009 00:34

lilian canale
Numri i postimeve: 14972
Done!