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अनुबाद - एस्पेरान्तो-अंग्रेजी - mi sentis sekuron, la sono de la viro sur la rook...

अहिलेको अवस्थाअनुबाद
यो हरफ निम्न भाषामा उपलब्ध छ: एस्पेरान्तोअंग्रेजी

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शीर्षक
mi sentis sekuron, la sono de la viro sur la rook...
हरफ
alirezaद्वारा बुझाइएको
स्रोत भाषा: एस्पेरान्तो

mi sentis sekuron, la sono de la viro sur la rook Altiris nian atenton, li skuis sian manon, li saltis, kaj post sekundo surŝprucigis nin malvarma akvo, la rida sono estis ripetata multfoje en mia orelo, tiu virino ridete diris: Iru al la avo, ni devas savi lin;
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी
American English

शीर्षक
I felt safe, the sound of the man on the rock...
अनुबाद
अंग्रेजी

ArenaL5द्वारा अनुबाद गरिएको
अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने भाषा: अंग्रेजी

I felt safe, the sound of the man on the rock caught our attention, he shook his hand, he jumped, and a second later, we were sprinkled with cold water, the laughing sound repeated many times in my ear, that woman said smiling: Go to Grandfather, we must save him;
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी
"Shake" as in "tremble", not as in "greeting"
"second" as in "time unit", not as in "number two"

Such kind of yuxtaposition is also unnatural in Esperanto. The most likely explanation this message was translated from other non-European language.

Therefore, commas were respected, except in "a second later, cold water", where I added one for clarity.

"Avo" could either mean "grandfather" or "grandmother", but it's usually used for the former.
Validated by Lein - 2012年 जुलाई 27日 12:57





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लेखक
सन्देश

2012年 जुलाई 12日 17:20

Lein
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 3389
Hi zciric

I don't think we have many people who speak Esperanto; could you help me evaluate this text please? Thanks!

CC: zciric

2012年 जुलाई 27日 12:49

zciric
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 91
What I should to check?

If the English translation was the "aim",
it is good, only in two places there is need for changes, I think.

The parts between '=':

"...and a second later, =we were submerged in cold water=, the laughing sound repeated many times in my ear,..."
surŝprucigis nin malvarma akvo -
better is: sprinkled us cold water

And the second thing is:
"...that woman said smiling: =Go with Grandfather=, we must save him;..."

In the Esperanto text the meaning is more for:
"Go TO Grandfather...", not 'WITH'.

If you need any further help... write.

Greetings
Zoran

2012年 जुलाई 27日 12:57

Lein
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 3389
Thanks Zoran, that's very helpful