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Hello Elmota
Haven't heard from you in such a long time, I hope you're ok
I needed a your opinion regarding this translation, what do u think?

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walla ya jaq life has swept me by my feet i find it hard to focus nowadays, its been like that for the past six months... thanks for asking

you can always say: أنا أحيا و في أعماقي احتضرbecause the "waw" in arabic can be used to mean "while" and yeah may be its a bit of a twist, or maybe the second part of your statement is too long, maybe just روحي تحتضر
and i dont know why you assumed the speaker is a female

I always assume it's a female speaker, right
Well, I really hate to evaluate my own translations so I hope you don't mind that I refer to you from time to time. And God bless you and ya3tiky el 3afieh