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Title
Magazin - Tri sam ti zime Å¡aptala ime - 1987
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Submitted by cterec
Source language: Croatian

Odlazim mili, sretni smo bili dok smo se voljeli
ti mirno spavaj, kraj druge sanjaj, za me ne brini
Odlazim tugo, žalicu dugo sto smo se voljeli
Idem dok srce još snage ima sve da ti oprosti

Tri sam ti zime Å¡aptala ime, sliku ljubila
zbog tebe sve sam izgubila jer sam te cekala
Tri sam ti zime Å¡aptala ime, sliku ljubila
zbog tebe sve sam napustila, nevjerna ljubavi
Å¡to smo se rastali

Title
Magazin-Three winters I had whispered your name-1987
Translation
English

Translated by lakil
Target language: English

I am leaving my darling, we were happy while we loved each other
You sleep quietly, dreaming next to another woman, don’t worry about me
I am leaving my sorrow, I will regret for a long time ‘cause we loved each other
I am leaving while there is still strength in my heart to forgive you all

For three winters I have whispered your name, kissed your picture
‘Cause of you I have lost everything, because I waited for you
For three winters I have whispered your name, kissed your picture
‘Cause of you I have left everything else, my disloyal love
Why did we get apart?
Last validated or edited by lilian canale - 10 April 2008 14:20





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5 April 2008 19:42

dramati
Number of messages: 972
Please work on the English some more. It is not correct enough to pass, but not so bad as to reject it out of hand.

6 April 2008 15:04

lakil
Number of messages: 249
Dramati...I am not sure how much work we can get on this..it is what you see..maybe others have some suggestions. This is a piece form a song and as any song it is realy hard to tranalste and sometimes it does not make much sense.

9 April 2008 17:56

maki_sindja
Number of messages: 1206
Lakil, jesi li ti to previdela da prevedeš prva dva reda refrena:"Tri sam ti zime šaptala ime, sliku ljubila, zbog tebe sve sam izgubila jer sam te cekala." Čini mi se da taj deo hvali.
Za ostalo, mislim da je ok. Možda da dodaš "...strength in my heart to forgive you all."
Pozdrav!

9 April 2008 18:12

lakil
Number of messages: 249
Yes..thank you maki..I must have been tired..
I have added last two lines and added "all" as you recommended. I think it is all set now. It should be..