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Más que mi amiga eres mi hermana. Eres mi roca,...
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Lähettäjä gem
Alkuperäinen kieli: Espanja

Más que mi amiga eres mi hermana.
Eres mi roca, quien me levanta y me da fuerza.
Te quiero.
Pon fortaleza a la debilidad.
No imagino mi vida sin vosotros.
Huomioita käännöksestä
femenino

<Bridge by Lilian>

"More than my friend you are my sister.
You are my rock, the one who rises me and gives me strength.
I love you.
Put strength on weakness.
I can't imagine the life without you (pl)."

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Soror mea quam amica mea amplius es.
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Kääntäjä alexfatt
Kohdekieli: Latina

Soror mea quam amica mea amplius es.
Vigor meus es, qui me erigit efficitque ut valeam.
Te amo.
Pone vim in debilitate.
Vitam meam sine vobis ante oculos non pono.
Viimeksi tarkastanut tai toimittanut Aneta B. - 30 Elokuu 2010 00:55





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29 Elokuu 2010 20:18

Aneta B.
Viestien lukumäärä: 4487
And here too.

CC: lilian canale

29 Elokuu 2010 21:32

lilian canale
Viestien lukumäärä: 14972
"More than my friend you are my sister.
You are my rock, the one who rises me and gives me strength.
I love you.
Put strength on weakness.
I can't imagine the life without you (pl)."

29 Elokuu 2010 21:43

Aneta B.
Viestien lukumäärä: 4487
Thank you so much!

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Alex, very good translation. Tiny corrections needed.


"Vitam meam sine vobis putare non possum". means rather: "I can't judge my life without you".
Could you change the verb "putare"?

The first line is not bad, but to make the sentence more clear, I'd suggest:

Soror mea amica mea magis es.
--> Soror mea quam amica mea amplius es.

more than = amplius quam

I know "amica mea" is in the ablative here, but Ist declension has the same form for the ablative and the nominative, so it is not clear and it is better when we avoid "ablativus comparativus" in such cases.


29 Elokuu 2010 23:11

alexfatt
Viestien lukumäärä: 1538
Hello Aneta!

Would it be better, if I replace "putare" with "cogitare"?

I agree with your suggestion about the comparative.
It was ambiguous but I couldn't think about another way to translate.
Yours is very clear.


29 Elokuu 2010 23:42

Aneta B.
Viestien lukumäärä: 4487
I just love your avatar, Alex! I always smile every time when I have a look at it...

"to imagine" = animo fingere, ante oculos ponere

You can choose.

I'm glad you liked my suggestion about expressing the comparison.


29 Elokuu 2010 23:55

alexfatt
Viestien lukumäärä: 1538
I'm glad I can make you happy, Aneta.
While I am cheering you up, you're teaching me more than my professors. It's true!!

I feel like making a suggestion:
"Vitam meam sine vobis putare non possum." > "Vitam meam sine vobis ante oculos non pono."

We can cut off "possum".
It's true that the English bridge shows "can", but it's just because the use of this verb is more marked in the English language than in Spanish or Latin.
In English they say "I can see" even when other languages just would conjugate the simple verb "to see" without any modal verb.

What do you think about?


30 Elokuu 2010 00:01

Aneta B.
Viestien lukumäärä: 4487
Very wise observation, dear pupil of mine! It's a pleasure to have so smart one. Believe me, I had different ones in my life...

Of course, your new version is just perfect!

30 Elokuu 2010 00:09

alexfatt
Viestien lukumäärä: 1538
Thanks, professor!