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Could a Turkish expert help me with a bridge for this one. I know it's quite long, so we share the points.
Thanks a lot.

CC: 44hazal44 cheesecake handyy

Hi gamine I think it's a complicated poetic text and also the part "salkım salıkım hastret" doesn't make sense in Turkish, I am not really sure what it means? Do you have any idea Turkish experts
Here is the bridge: (without the translation of that part)

I am in autumn, I am in between the ruins with my leftovers
I'm leaving, (I am )far away from your heart
In my each step, there is no existence of my niceness/kindness
I'm less after you
I walk, my hope becomes a way to my shadow
I walk, implanting a bunch of love to my dream
I walk, my tomorrow becomes a way to my night
I walk, ???
A drop of a complaint/remonstrance in my pocket
I walk, my hope becomes a way to my shadow
I walk, implanting a bunch of love to my dream
I walk, my tomorrow becomes a way to my night
I walk, ???
A drop of a complaint/remonstrance in my pocket

Thanks dear Cheesecake. Thanks so much for your help. You have done a great work. Perhaps the other Turkish experts can help me with the few sentences left.

CC: handyy 44hazal44

Hi

I agree with Cheesecake's translation but I don't have any idea for "salkım salıkım hastret" ...

Salkım salkım hasret--> Bunchy longing. (Weird, isn't it?) Lene, you can translate it as "ever-increasing longing", I think it will meet the intended meaning more or less.

Btw, I would translate the the fisrt part as follows (just a suggestion ) :

I'm in autumn, I am in between the ruins, with what remained from me*
I'm leaving, far away from your heart
(There is)Loneliness in each of my steps**
No act of kindness from me anymore, I'm less after you (have gone.)


* "leftovers" evokes the foods remaining from a meal, I think. that's why changed it.

** "Her adımda yalnızlığım
İnceliğim yok senden sonra azım" -- here you missed to translate "yalnızlığım".

Hej igen Lene

En anden oversættelse som venter på dig

CC: gamine

Nej, den er også til dig. Vi skal dele og jeg har knap tid i øjeblikket. Sig JA.

CC: Bamsa

Thanks to all of you, my dear Turkish friends.

CC: cheesecake

Ok jeg oversætter den

Hej Lene

Jeg må sige at denne anmodning er lidt svær at oversætte Jeg må have et par ekstra dage til at tænke mig om...

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CC: Bamsa