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Sonbahardayım
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Idioma de origen: Turco

Sonbahardayım kalanımla yıkıntılar arsındayım
Gidiyorum yüreğinden uzak
Her adımda yalnızlığım
İnceliğim yok senden sonra azım
Yürürüm umudum yol olur gölgeme
Yürürüm bir bağ sevda ekip düşüme
Yürürüm yarınım yol olur geceme
Yürürüm salkım salıkım hastret
Bir damla sitem cebimde
Yürürüm umudum yol olur gölgeme
Yürürüm bir bağ sevda ekip düşüme
Yürürüm yarınım yol olur geceme
Yürürüm salkım salıkım hastret
Bir damla sitem cebimde
Última corrección por lilian canale - 22 Diciembre 2009 18:22





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18 Diciembre 2009 15:27

gamine
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Could a Turkish expert help me with a bridge for this one. I know it's quite long, so we share the points.
Thanks a lot.

CC: 44hazal44 cheesecake handyy

21 Diciembre 2009 22:07

cheesecake
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Hi gamine I think it's a complicated poetic text and also the part "salkım salıkım hastret" doesn't make sense in Turkish, I am not really sure what it means? Do you have any idea Turkish experts
Here is the bridge: (without the translation of that part)

I am in autumn, I am in between the ruins with my leftovers
I'm leaving, (I am )far away from your heart
In my each step, there is no existence of my niceness/kindness
I'm less after you
I walk, my hope becomes a way to my shadow
I walk, implanting a bunch of love to my dream
I walk, my tomorrow becomes a way to my night
I walk, ???
A drop of a complaint/remonstrance in my pocket
I walk, my hope becomes a way to my shadow
I walk, implanting a bunch of love to my dream
I walk, my tomorrow becomes a way to my night
I walk, ???
A drop of a complaint/remonstrance in my pocket

21 Diciembre 2009 22:59

gamine
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Thanks dear Cheesecake. Thanks so much for your help. You have done a great work. Perhaps the other Turkish experts can help me with the few sentences left.

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22 Diciembre 2009 17:59

44hazal44
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Hi

I agree with Cheesecake's translation but I don't have any idea for "salkım salıkım hastret" ...

6 Enero 2010 23:51

handyy
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Salkım salkım hasret--> Bunchy longing. (Weird, isn't it?) Lene, you can translate it as "ever-increasing longing", I think it will meet the intended meaning more or less.

7 Enero 2010 00:16

handyy
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Btw, I would translate the the fisrt part as follows (just a suggestion ) :

I'm in autumn, I am in between the ruins, with what remained from me*
I'm leaving, far away from your heart
(There is)Loneliness in each of my steps**
No act of kindness from me anymore, I'm less after you (have gone.)


* "leftovers" evokes the foods remaining from a meal, I think. that's why changed it.

** "Her adımda yalnızlığım
İnceliğim yok senden sonra azım" -- here you missed to translate "yalnızlığım".

7 Febrero 2010 23:45

Bamsa
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Hej igen Lene

En anden oversættelse som venter på dig

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8 Febrero 2010 00:11

gamine
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Nej, den er også til dig. Vi skal dele og jeg har knap tid i øjeblikket. Sig JA.

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8 Febrero 2010 00:10

gamine
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Thanks to all of you, my dear Turkish friends.

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8 Febrero 2010 00:31

Bamsa
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Ok jeg oversætter den

9 Febrero 2010 23:50

Bamsa
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Hej Lene

Jeg må sige at denne anmodning er lidt svær at oversætte Jeg må have et par ekstra dage til at tænke mig om...

10 Febrero 2010 01:42

gamine
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Tag bare din tid. Hvis du har brug for hjælp kan jeg måske , jeg siger måske hjælpe dig. Du kan sende mig pm'er.


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