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corrections:

230.00 $ for Ford 5000 --> $230.00 for a Ford 5000

The works never stopped --> Our work (?) has never stopped

tie rots --> tie rods

with the amount of commission --> on commission

for making you sorry --> for making you unhappy

NOTE: We don't say "yours affectionately" in a business transaction in English - it would sound VERY strange. Do you think we can just take it out and say "yours sincerely"?

cheesecake, why did you only make the one correction here?

It's OK now.Thanks.

You still missed the first two corrections, cheesecake.

First two corrections? I don't understand what you mean, I have made all the corrections that you told me, except the one you put a question mark.
I think it is "The works have never stopped like that" because there is not mentioned "our work" there, so I prefer not to change it but I already changed the tense mistake. So is it still wrong?

230.00 $ --> $230.00

The reason why I put a question mark on the 2nd one was because I wasn't sure about the meaning. You cannot say "the works", but does it really mean "our work"?