Hi Mesud,
I have made some minor edits. Let me know if you don't agree.
A few questions before I set a poll:
By saying "do you know what happens when drink a coke?" -> how about 'Prof. Dr. Karatay, who asked "do you know etc" has made the statement below.
(In English, when you say 'by saying' it means saying this itself implies something. For example, by saying he would do it again, he demonstrated his contempt for the rules'. If you say 'by saying x, he said y', it means that he did not actually say y - it was implied in x. I hope this is clear...
'insulin will unusually be produced'
How about 'high amounts of insulin will be produced' or 'unusual / abnormal / exceptional amounts of insulin will be produced' ?
Are you sure the original text says that much of your blood will start to get stored in the liver? Shouldn't that be much of your blood sugar?
passing from the liver into blood by being produced more sugar -> this is not an understandable sentence. What do you mean here?