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21 Март 2009 18:09 |
| | Hi MIss. I've made a few tiny corrections and set a poll, however the last line doesn't sound well. What do you mean by "flow us"?
Is that: "overflow us"? or "flow from us"? |
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21 Март 2009 18:12 |
| | Yes lilian, of course you're right. Could you edit that please?
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21 Март 2009 18:15 |
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21 Март 2009 18:27 |
| | May it not overflow us.
Thank you Lilian
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21 Март 2009 18:45 |
| | ...I thought SHE would be mine... |
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21 Март 2009 18:53 |
| | Hi Sevdalinka,
I guess in this sentence he speaks about the eyes because in the following sentence he use "you" to speak to the girl. If this sentence was talking about the girl I think he has used "you" also. |
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21 Март 2009 19:08 |
| | I agree with Sevdalinka.
It can be also "I thought you would be mine", because "green eyes" are plural and "benim olacak" is singural.
for me ,it is
I was on fire for those green eyes
I thought you would be mine.
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21 Март 2009 19:12 |
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21 Март 2009 19:26 |
| | Yes ofcouse, but at all there is always "you". |
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21 Март 2009 19:57 |
| | Hülya gönlünü egle Hülya
Hülya dally with somebody Hülya olamaz... |
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21 Март 2009 21:10 |
| | I guess turkishmiss is right about "they would be mine" It might be 'SHE would' but we cannot be sure about this as the writer doesn't use any other preposition there. I guess "they would.." is more reliable.
onlar benim olacak
o benim olacak. I think there's nothing wrong with it. 'olacak' can be used in both. |
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22 Март 2009 00:59 |
| | Okey, "they" or "she" is not really important here... Let it stay as it is 
"Hülya gönlünü egle Hülya" I'd translate as "Hülya entertain your heart Hülya" or "Hülya ridicule your heart Hülya". |
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22 Март 2009 01:02 |
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22 Март 2009 01:34 |
| | Turkishmiss, thank you, I know it, but I'd translate that way. This is just my opinion, I think will be better to translate as "ridicule your heart". grbz_94 thoughts that those translation is not correct either. |
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22 Март 2009 01:41 |
| | Grbz94,
do you still think "Hülya dally with somebody Hülya" is wrong translated?
CC: grbz_94 |
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22 Март 2009 03:50 |
| | In my opinion, both of you are right. gönül eğlemek or gönül eğlendirmek, they mean the same. You can say dally with someone or entertain your heart; or even we might say amuse yourself, or playing the field, maybe. So I think it's about translator's choice. |
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22 Март 2009 12:04 |
| | okayy, no problem |
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