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SONO UN ING. NAVALE, DOPO AVER FREQUENTATO...
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SONO UN ING. NAVALE, DOPO AVER FREQUENTATO L'ACCADEMIA
NAVALE A LIVORNO ED ESSERMI LAUREATO A GENOVA NEL 2003,
SONO STATO IMBARCATO SU UNA FREGATA MILITARE. QUI HO
RICOPERTO INCARICHI DI RESPONSABILITA':
SUPERVISORE E RESPONSABILE DELL'EFFICIENZA DEL SISTEMA
DI PIATTAFORMA DELLA NAVE: IMPIANTI DI CONDIZIONAMENTO,
DI PRODUZIONE ACQUA DOLCE, IMPIANTI OLEODINAMICI E DI SICUREZZA).
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La traduzione in inglese (Inghilterra)

Tytuł
I am a naval engineer, after having attended...
Tłumaczenie
Angielski

Tłumaczone przez iamfromaustria
Język docelowy: Angielski

I am a naval engineer, after having attended the Naval Academy in Livorno and graduating in Genoa in 2003, I embarked on a military frigate. There, I filled a position of much responsibility. Supervisor and the person in charge for the efficiency of the platform system of the ship, the air conditioning, the production of fresh water, the oil hydraulic system and the safety facilities.
Ostatnio zatwierdzony albo edytowany przez lilian canale - 14 Lipiec 2008 18:13





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12 Lipiec 2008 18:51

lilian canale
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Hi Heidrun,

the first line:
"after I had attended the naval academy in Livorno and after I had finished my studies at university in Genoa in 2003,"

would read better and perhaps be more accurate if it was simply:

"after having attended the Naval Academy in Livorno and graduating in Genoa in 2003,"

What do you think?

12 Lipiec 2008 20:00

iamfromaustria
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Both suggestions are very good. I'm going to change it, thank you.

12 Lipiec 2008 20:54

imogilnitskaya
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Why to complicate so much? simply "after attending...after graduating..."
grammatically "after having attended" is correct, but nowadays they don`t use those complicated forms if they can say the same thing simplier...

12 Lipiec 2008 20:59

lilian canale
Liczba postów: 14972
Hi imogilnitskaya (Uff...what a nick!)

Yes, it's not only nowadays that people simplify their speech when talking colloquially. It has been that way for a long time. However this text seems to be quite formal. That's why we tried to keep it into the same shape of the original, that is: using compound tenses.

Thanks for your input.

13 Lipiec 2008 05:49

kafetzou
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I was embarked --> I embarked

the oilhydraulic-system = ???

13 Lipiec 2008 13:43

Guzel_R
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As far as I know "graduating" is US English, may be it is better "taking a degree"?

13 Lipiec 2008 13:47

iamfromaustria
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No, my dictionary states explicitly that "graduating" (meaning finishing university) is British English.

Kaf, maybe "oil-hydraulic system"? I'm not that good at technical vocabulary, but Italo07 told me that it was "Ölhydrauliksystem" in German.

13 Lipiec 2008 13:50

Guzel_R
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Ok, because in my dictionary it is like US English.

14 Lipiec 2008 05:44

kafetzou
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"graduate" is used in both British English and North American English, but it is used differently. In British English, it is used as a transitive verb - a university graduates a student, so a student "is graduated", whereas in North American English it is intransitive, so a student "graduates". So in this case I believe it should be "after being graduated", but I'll check with Tantine (our British native speaker).

And, yes, iamfromaustria, I think "oil-hydraulic system" or just plain "oil hydraulic system" is correct. I would remove the hyphen from "platform system" too.

14 Lipiec 2008 05:46

kafetzou
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Oops - I forgot to cc Tantine.

CC: Tantine

14 Lipiec 2008 05:53

lilian canale
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I've removed the hyphens.
Now, let's wait for Tantine's input about the British use of "graduate".

14 Lipiec 2008 18:05

iamfromaustria
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Wow, 3 English experts who need to work on my translation... I hope it wasn't that bad.

14 Lipiec 2008 22:05

iamfromaustria
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Sorry to bother you again, Lily, but shouldn't it be "the person in charge of"?

CC: lilian canale

14 Lipiec 2008 22:20

lilian canale
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Both can be used, but in this case I'd rather use:
"the person in charge for (getting) the efficiency of the platform system..."

14 Lipiec 2008 22:21

iamfromaustria
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Ok, thanks for your explanation

15 Lipiec 2008 00:57

Tantine
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Hi All

I checked up in my Chamber's, and "graduate" can also be used as an intransitive verb in British English too . In fact it can be used as either, one can be graduated by a university, or one can graduate from a university so you have the choice

Bises
Tantine

15 Lipiec 2008 01:10

kafetzou
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Very interesting - thanks, Tantine!!

15 Lipiec 2008 01:13

lilian canale
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I think we can be sure the translations is totally correct.

Thank you all!!!