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Journey

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casper tavernello

源语言: 英语翻译 Urunghai

Only a part of the field is sowed
nevertheless, setting off on another journey

Roaming the paths
Eyelids swollen
Scent of smoke
Song of a cicada

Losing sight of the steep hills far away
nevertheless, setting off on another journey

Lights turned out
Unfinished streets
You are home no longer
There's nothing but a cove here

Let's see what the children are playing
Let's see what the children are playing
A soft and gentle voice is calling

After the storm

During a ritual of trains, tracks and tunnels
Who will go and join you
on your journey to nowhere?

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Resa

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Porfyhr

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Endast en del av fÃ¤ltet har sÃ¥tts
men Ã¤ndÃ¥, pÃ¥ vÃ¤g pÃ¥ ny resa

Flackande pÃ¥ gÃ¥ngar
Svullna Ã¶gonlock
Doften av rÃ¶k
En cikadas sÃ¥ng

AvstÃ¥ndet fÃ¶rsvinner av de branta stupen,
oavsett det sÃ¥ Ã¤r jag igen pÃ¥ resa

Belysningen slÃ¤cks
SÃ¶ndriga gator
Du Ã¤r ej lÃ¤ngre hemma
HÃ¤r Ã¤r det bara en hÃ¥la

LÃ¥t se vad det Ã¤r barnen leker
LÃ¥t se vad det Ã¤r barnen leker
En mjuk och vÃ¤n rÃ¶st kallar.

Efter stormen

Under en ritual av tÃ¥g, rÃ¤ls & tunnlar.
Vem vill slÃ¥ fÃ¶lje med dig dÃ¤r
pÃ¥ din resa till ingenstans?

由Porfyhr认可或编辑 - 2007年九月 19日 19:09

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		2007年九月 14日 15:58
	joy080 文章总计: 2	hello
		2007年九月 19日 16:53
	Porfyhr 文章总计: 793	Casper! Vill du vara sÃ¥ snÃ¤ll och lÃ¤sa min Ã¶versÃ¤ttning och se om jag fÃ¥ngat, eller, missfÃ¶rstÃ¥tt nÃ¥got. Jag gÃ¶r Ã¤ven den norska om ingen annan hinner fÃ¶re.
		2007年九月 19日 18:42
	casper tavernello 文章总计: 5057	Why "lÃ¥ngt borta, oavsett det sÃ¥ Ã¤r jag pÃ¥ vÃ¤g"? The french>english one can give you a lot about the meanings of some parts of the text. I'm a little busy right now but I trust you to make an excellent job. The other parts of the text are pretty good. Thanks Jim!
		2007年九月 19日 19:07
	Porfyhr 文章总计: 793	Casper! I have worked intensely on the translations (this is what I like!). The Swedish translations was a bit more difficult as we tend to use more conjunctions than Norwegian. I have checked the Norwegian with my ex so it is true Norwegian (I didn't have to change anything, PROUDLY!) May I ask what you are going to do with this poem? /Jim
		2007年九月 19日 19:42
	casper tavernello 文章总计: 5057	Oh! I just didn't understand why you are using first person on the third paragraph and not just repeating the sense of the first one, as it is more like a narrative text. I am declaiming poetry with a few friends and my girlfriend (she likes it the most), and sometimes I declaim some translations of my cucumis' friends.