نص أصلي - ياباني - 明日天気になーれ

It's been a long time...Ian-sensei!

My english translation...
I do not know whether i could translate textually...but this is a translation that i did with my skill...!



-Title-
Be a good whether,please!

Never hesitate. Never quail. Never look away.
Never doubt. Never suffer saddness. Never stop stepping forward.

Is this english translation correct in eyes of you,native english speaker?

CC: IanMegill2

It's very good!
We would maybe say:
MAY THERE BE GOOD WEATHER TOMORROW

Never hesitate. Never quail. Never look away.
Never doubt. Never be sad. Never stop advancing.

Good job, anyway!