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Превод - Английски-Италиански - when I'm near youТекущо състояние Превод
Този текст го има и на следните езици:
Категория Песен - Любов / Приятелство | | | Език, от който се превежда: Английски
when I'm near you my heart won't be told, It just feels what it feels, knows what it knows. I want to do what feels right |
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| | ПреводИталиански Преведено от GhiRic | Желан език: Италиански
Quando sono vicino a te al mio cuore non può esser detto ciò che deve fare, semplicemente sente quello che sente, sa quello che sa. Voglio fare quello che sembra giusto. |
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За последен път се одобри от alexfatt - 20 Август 2012 19:46
Последно мнение | | | | | 1 Август 2012 12:12 | | | Riccardo,
Dai un'occhiata alla discussione qua e correggi la traduzione... Ho chiesto delucidazioni a un'esperta per l'inglese perché non ero sicuro del significato della prima parte della frase.
| | | 19 Август 2012 23:46 | | | | | | 21 Август 2012 09:11 | | | Alex & (GhiRic):
May I suggest a simpler, shorter (and perhaps, fairer) version?:
“Quando sono vicino a te, il mio cuore è libero,... (?)
And with respect to the rest, why not: "soltanto" in place of "semplicemente"? [Not so confident of this point; it's just a guess... Perhaps a whisper from the past.]
| | | 22 Август 2012 00:38 | | | Hi Lev!
I think your suggestion is very good, but GhiRic's translation is very good too. There are many ways to translate this line, and any of them can be acceptable. I think it mostly depends on how translators approach this line and on how much of themselves they put in this translation.
| | | 22 Август 2012 08:01 | | | Of course, Alex!
I just wanted to point out the following: if you count the words of the original English idiom ("my heart won't be told" ), you find 5 --or 6, if you want--. Then you count the words employed in the Italian expression and find 11.
My alternative has 5, as the original. It was only this.
(And I wanted to know from you, as well, if my second suggestion was right in Italian. I had a slight doubt.)
| | | 22 Август 2012 12:36 | | | About "soltanto" you mean? Yes, it could be a valuable alternative, but the word order should be changed a bit (i.e. sente soltanto quello che sente).
| | | 22 Август 2012 17:39 | | | Oh, yes, yes: "sente soltanto..." I meant that order.
Many thanks for your response, Alex! I'm trying to wipe the dust and the rust off my vetusto italiano, now that I have the chance, here in Cucumis
Best Regards!
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