Оригинален текст - Латински - Neque in tantis dissensionibus ad exercitum venire posse.

Allochka, why did you separate the sentences?

> Miserantur communem Galliae fortunam;
> Omnibus pollicitationibus ac praemius deposcunt qui belli initium;
> Faciantsui capitis periculo Galliam in libertatem vindicent;
> In primis rationem esse habendam dicunt, priusquam eorum clandestina
> Caesar ab exercitu intercludatur.

Should be:

miserantur communem Galliae fortunam: omnibus pollicitationibus ac praemius deposcunt qui belli initium faciant et sui capitis periculo Galliam in libertatem vindicent. In primis rationem esse habendam dicunt, priusquam eorum clandestina consilia efferantur, ut Caesar ab exercitu intercludatur.

(Caesar,Commentaries on the Gallic War/Book 7)

There are also some gaps in your version. The meaning of your text isn't readable anymore because of it. Compare the versions, please.
I don't know what to do with this request...

Francky, could you tell me, please, what should I do in this case? The requester isn't logged in from nearly a month...
I'd complete the text according to the original version... Can I do it?

CC: Francky5591

Well, maybe is there a reason why requester displayed her text this way.
Let's wait until she's back.

Hm, but she also made gaps in the text and that is a reason she made the text incomprehensible... But ok, I will wait for her answer... Thank you, uncle Ben!

CC: Francky5591

To jest tekst listu, który otrzymałam przez e-mail, dlaczego to tak napisane - nie wiem, ale chcę wiedzieć jak to jest przetłumaczone.
Przepraszam za mój polski, jeśli coś jest nie tak.

Cóż, w drugiej części brakuje wielu wyrazów, Allochka i dlatego trudno będzie to przetłumaczyć w takiej formie. Mogę spróbować zrobić angielski most do tego, ale wolałabym, zeby tekst był kompletny, czyli taki jaki zamieściłam powyżej.
Ale do pierwszej części już gotowa byłabym zrobić most i przekazać go komuś kto zna Portugalski. A więc, sama zdecyduj. Zmieniamy drugą część? Forma może zostać taka sama, ale trzeba dodać parę słów. Proponuję:

> Miserantur communem Galliae fortunam;
> Omnibus pollicitationibus ac praemius deposcunt qui belli initium faciant et sui capitis periculo Galliam in libertatem vindicent;
> In primis rationem esse habendam dicunt, priusquam eorum clandestina consilia efferantur, ut Caesar ab exercitu intercludatur.

Co o tym myślisz?

Probably without edits I proposed above the text can't be translated in a proper way...