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Some small changes are in order:
I still haven't been able to pick up the products you sent from customs .
Because that for electronic goods to be imported, a certificate of guarantee of the importer and a certificate attesting to compliance with standards are required. Since I can't produce these certificates, I can't pick up the products from customs.
As a result of this I have to return the goods. I'd appreciate if you can assist me with this. If you would communicate to me the expected additional costs and your wishes, I'll start proceedings accordingly. So the fact that these requirements were made, turned out very bad for me too.

I thank you for your concern. I await your response.

About the edit: you have proven yourself to be capable of superior work, so I expect more of you than of others.

ok thanks

edited accordingly...btw sounds indeed better than 'according to these'

Nice translation - I would take out the word "so" at the beginning of the 2nd to last sentence, though.

it was to translate "Bu ÅŸekilde"

Doesn't "Bu ÅŸekilde" go with "bir talep"? If so, it should be "this kind of requirement". The way you've used "so", it means "thus".

yes you're right. you should edit it though kafetzou because i no longer can

David, why did you validate this when I was still discussing it with the translator?