Översättning - Spanska-Engelska - Siempre seras la niña que me llena el alma como...

Hola ellasevia,

Good to see you around

This is a very good translation, except for the last two lines. They should read:
"just the echo of my disappointment remains
I stay here in my dream of keeping loving you"

However, since the original is rhymed, I'd like you to release your poetic vein and try to get some rhyme in English too.

Will you try?

I see you won't.

Here's my try, then:

You will always be the girl fulfilling my soul
like a restless sea, like a sea when lull
always as distant as the horizon,
yelling in the silence your name on my lips.
Just the echo of my disillusion is left
In my dream of keeping loving you, I rest.

What do you think?

That sounds great. Sorry for not getting back sooner. The only thing I would say sounds better in English is "In my dream of continuing to love you" instead of "n my dream of keeping loving you."

Yeah, you're right. It sounds smoother

Okay, I will change it to your version.

You don't have to. Your version is at the poll. I just wanted to try the rhyme. I can't help it Every time a poem shows up I don't resist

Oh, okay. It won't let me anyways.

lejana -> distant

seguirte amando -> keep loving you