Hi angelsrolls
Sorry it has taken so long to start evaluating your translation - we always seem to have more translations from Turkish waiting than we have experts for
- From the title, it looks like in a previous version, you had said 'situation' instead of 'condition'. 'Situation' sounds more neutral here ('condition' sounds like a serious illness); do you think 'situation' might fit here?
- usually, in a negative sentence, 'anything' is better than 'something'. If you meant to say 'there is nothing I have to say', the best way here would be 'I don't need to say
anything'.
- 'that everything would be all right' -> this implies the person hopes that everything is ok now. If he wishes that in the future it will be ok, the way to say this would be 'that everything will be all right'.
- 'this is best' sounds more natural than 'this is
the best'.
'may everything you wish (for) come true' sounds better than 'may everything
that etc'.
Could you let me know if you agree with these suggestions? If so, you or I can edit the text and then I can set a poll.
Thanks!
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