Μετάφραση - Γαλλικά-Αγγλικά - Mon gÃ©niteur. La tÃªte se dÃ©chire Le cÅ“ur cogne ...

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τίτλος	Mon gÃ©niteur. La tÃªte se dÃ©chire Le cÅ“ur cogne ...
Κείμενο Υποβλήθηκε από gamine	Γλώσσα πηγής: Γαλλικά Mon gÃ©niteur. La tÃªte se dÃ©chire Le cÅ“ur cogne Tu as sans vergogne pris ma libertÃ©. Tu fus mon pÃ¨re Tu es parti mais la douleur reste encore me privant, Ã jamais, de ma sÃ©rÃ©nitÃ©. J'Ã©tais un enfant sans dÃ©fense L'enfant a grandit sans avoir comprit Tu m'as implorÃ© mon pardon que je ne pouvais te donner Tu es parti sans, et moi, je reste, les ailes brisÃ©es Ã jamais. Tu es parti sans que j'ai pu te dire que le pÃ¨re que tu fus avant me manque et que je l'aime Maintenant les larmes peuvent enfin couler.
Παρατηρήσεις σχετικά με τη μετάφραση	I would like if Lilian would accept to translate these words for me, although she is overworked, but I'm not in a hurry.

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My genitor

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lilian canale

Γλώσσα προορισμού: Αγγλικά

My genitor.

The head tears
The heart pounds
You have, shamelessly
taken my freedom.

You were my father
You are gone
but the pain still remains
depriving me, forever, of my serenity.

I was a child
defenseless
The child has grown up
unable to understand

You've begged my pardon
which I couldn't give you
You left without,
and I remain,
wings broken forever.

You're gone
and I could not tell you
that I miss the father you were before
and that I love him

Now the tears can finally flow

Τελευταία επικύρωση ή επεξεργασία από Bamsa

- 29 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 08:39

Τελευταία μηνύματα

	Συγγραφέας	Μήνυμα
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 01:01
	lilian canale Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 14972	I hope you are not disappointed, Lene I did my best.
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 01:09
	gamine Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 4611	My dear Lilian. Thanks soooo much. I didn't expected it to be translated as fast and and really you got all of it. No use for a poll. I accept it right away and don't want someone to say this or that about the translation. You've caught what I had to say and described what I feel. Thanks again, so much to you, my sensitive expert.
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 01:13
	lilian canale Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 14972	Oh, thanks, dear Lene. I'm glad you liked my version, I didn't try to get any rhyme since deep feelings don't need to rhyme, just to be honestly expressed. That's a beautiful poem.
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 01:28
	gamine Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 4611	As you say. No use for rhyme. Anyway I'm not good at that but you expressed my feelings and that was what I needed. Thanks again, Lilian and now allow you some some rest, now you have translated my request. Joking. Now I'll go to bed . Enjoy your evening. And thanks for your big heart.
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 09:12
	Burduf Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 238	Fine, but excuse me, isn't possible to translate "gÃ©niteur" into english. Il y a lÃ comme un sens second, Ã ne pas vouloir dire "mon pÃ¨re" comme pour lui dÃ©nier ce rÃ´le Bonne semaine Ã toutes et tous
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 15:17
	gamine Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 4611	Yes, Burduff, of course you're right, but it just that I didn't want to discuss this translation too much, and I really find Lilian's translation perfect. But of course we could translate this word "gÃ©niteur" into English, perhaps "procreator". Can you do it, Lilian, please. And thanks again. CC: Burduf
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 15:40
	Aneta B. Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 4487	Beautiful poem and excellent translation! I was moved so much...
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 15:48
	gamine Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 4611	Thanks little one. And as you say: excellent translation.
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 16:11
	lilian canale Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 14972	Actually I was in doubt about whether I should translate "gÃ©niteur" as "genitor", which even being the scientific noun for parent, it establishes a distance, a lack of affection in the relationship. If that is what you meant, Lene, I'll edit.
		28 Σεπτέμβριος 2009 23:14
	gamine Αριθμός μηνυμάτων: 4611	Well, it's quite funny, Lilian, because I didn't know it myself, before Burduff spoke about it, and I realised that, actually, he was right. So, yes, please, if you could correct it to genitor it would be fine. And one more time, thanks so much, dear Lilian. CC: Burduf