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איגור שלום בהמשך לפגישתנו שהתקיימה אצלנו יחד...
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איגור שלום

זכרון דברים

בהמשך לפגישתנו שהתקיימה אצלנו יחד עם מר קובלסקי להלן התחומים
הפוטנציאליים שניתן לפתח ושמהווים זכרון דברים כבסיס להסכם שתוף פעולה
עתידי.

1.
שיווק קרן agamit לשוק האישראלי.
היות ובתי השקעות חברות ביטוח ישאליות והמשקיעים הפרטיים מיעדים חלק
מנכסים שלהם לשווקים הבינלאומיים ובפרט לשווקים המתפתחים
לכן אנו מציעים לשווק את הקרן לבנקים ללקוחות מוסדיים וחברות ביטוח בישראל.

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memorandum
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Preveo dramati
Ciljni jezik: Engleski

Hello Igor

memorandum

In continuation of our meeting which was held at our offices, together with Mr. Koblski the following are the potential areas that can be opened and that will require a memorandum of understanding as a base for future cooperation.

1. Agamit marketing for the Israeli market.
Whereas Israeli Insurance investment firms and private investors represent a part of their assets in the international market and especially in developing markets, we recommend marketing the capital to banks, institutional customers, and Insurance companies in Israel.
Posljednji potvrdio i uredio kafetzou - 18 rujan 2007 01:40





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5 rujan 2007 20:30

milkman
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The assets talked about in the second part are not the addressee's but the assets of the firms and private investors. Therefore instead of "your assets" it should be written "their assets"

16 rujan 2007 16:10

kafetzou
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I edited "your" to "their" and removed the double "and".

What about "whereas" and "therefore" in the same sentence? That doesn't make sense in English.

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16 rujan 2007 20:04

kafetzou
Broj poruka: 7963
NOTE: Milkman sent the following to my inbox:

I think this would be more like it:

"Since Israeli Insurance investment firms and private investors represent a part of their assets in the international market and especially in developing markets, we recommend marketing the capital to banks, institutional customers, and Insurance companies in Israel."

also maybe use "designate" instead of "represent" + all the appropriate syntactic amendments

16 rujan 2007 20:05

kafetzou
Broj poruka: 7963
What is an "MOA (memorandum of Understanding)"?

16 rujan 2007 20:08

kafetzou
Broj poruka: 7963
Also, what happened to the first two lines of the text?

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17 rujan 2007 17:32

ahikamr
Broj poruka: 51
The two first lines are:

Hello Igor (a name) - איגור שלום
memorandum - זכרון דברים

As for the sentence that makes no sense in English, well it's a bit senseless in Hebrew too, but you can change the "Whereas" to: "because of"
and delete the "therefor". That's should do the trick. Maybe you can just delete the "therefor" (without changing the "whereas".

MOA should be; "memorandum".

18 rujan 2007 01:40

kafetzou
Broj poruka: 7963
Thank you, ahikamr. I have edited it and I will accept it.