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איגור שלום בהמשך לפגישתנו שהתקיימה אצלנו יחד...
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Enviado por marc17
Idioma de origem: Hebraico

איגור שלום

זכרון דברים

בהמשך לפגישתנו שהתקיימה אצלנו יחד עם מר קובלסקי להלן התחומים
הפוטנציאליים שניתן לפתח ושמהווים זכרון דברים כבסיס להסכם שתוף פעולה
עתידי.

1.
שיווק קרן agamit לשוק האישראלי.
היות ובתי השקעות חברות ביטוח ישאליות והמשקיעים הפרטיים מיעדים חלק
מנכסים שלהם לשווקים הבינלאומיים ובפרט לשווקים המתפתחים
לכן אנו מציעים לשווק את הקרן לבנקים ללקוחות מוסדיים וחברות ביטוח בישראל.

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memorandum
Tradução
Inglês

Traduzido por dramati
Idioma alvo: Inglês

Hello Igor

memorandum

In continuation of our meeting which was held at our offices, together with Mr. Koblski the following are the potential areas that can be opened and that will require a memorandum of understanding as a base for future cooperation.

1. Agamit marketing for the Israeli market.
Whereas Israeli Insurance investment firms and private investors represent a part of their assets in the international market and especially in developing markets, we recommend marketing the capital to banks, institutional customers, and Insurance companies in Israel.
Último validado ou editado por kafetzou - 18 Setembro 2007 01:40





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5 Setembro 2007 20:30

milkman
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The assets talked about in the second part are not the addressee's but the assets of the firms and private investors. Therefore instead of "your assets" it should be written "their assets"

16 Setembro 2007 16:10

kafetzou
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I edited "your" to "their" and removed the double "and".

What about "whereas" and "therefore" in the same sentence? That doesn't make sense in English.

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16 Setembro 2007 20:04

kafetzou
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NOTE: Milkman sent the following to my inbox:

I think this would be more like it:

"Since Israeli Insurance investment firms and private investors represent a part of their assets in the international market and especially in developing markets, we recommend marketing the capital to banks, institutional customers, and Insurance companies in Israel."

also maybe use "designate" instead of "represent" + all the appropriate syntactic amendments

16 Setembro 2007 20:05

kafetzou
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What is an "MOA (memorandum of Understanding)"?

16 Setembro 2007 20:08

kafetzou
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Also, what happened to the first two lines of the text?

איגור שלום

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17 Setembro 2007 17:32

ahikamr
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The two first lines are:

Hello Igor (a name) - איגור שלום
memorandum - זכרון דברים

As for the sentence that makes no sense in English, well it's a bit senseless in Hebrew too, but you can change the "Whereas" to: "because of"
and delete the "therefor". That's should do the trick. Maybe you can just delete the "therefor" (without changing the "whereas".

MOA should be; "memorandum".

18 Setembro 2007 01:40

kafetzou
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Thank you, ahikamr. I have edited it and I will accept it.