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La sminko distingas vin Malplacas nokt-rutin'...

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Idioma de origen: Esperanto

La sminko distingas vin
Malplacas nokt-rutin'
Trivita ago, kotanta pago, fridas ci imago

Senmove frostas vi
Destruas la medi'
Tima bezono, de aca mono, sen glora krono

Sub pelta vest-abundo
Kasigas via vundo
Ci kvartalo esta vualo por vivobatalo

Dum nokto forvagis vi
De via famili'
Sajniga foto, tro dolca noto, mesago el la koto

Sinjoro, estigas tragedio
Sinjoro, vi agas sen konscio
Vi pagas por ci amor'
Vi pagas kaj iras for - pasanta pasio

26 Mayo 2009 21:32

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	Autor	Mensaje
		16 Junio 2009 14:54
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Hi Zoran, I know this is a quite looooong text, but could you please provide a bridge for evaluation when you have time? I'd really appreciate it.
		20 Junio 2009 10:56
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Oops! I forgot to notify you CC: zciric
		12 Julio 2009 22:37
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Hi Zoran, Again, please could you provide a bridge in English for evaluation? CC: zciric
		14 Julio 2009 11:10
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Goncin, please if you have time could you check this translation? It's been waiting for evaluation for quite long. Thanks CC: goncin
		18 Julio 2009 01:27
	zciric Cantidad de envíos: 91	Aaaa... for this one... Now I push the right "answer" buton... You already wrote for this, but I was thinking that you had asked a bridge for the translation before... Sorry.. Hmm, this is some poem... To put that into the English... I'll need couple of days but I'll try... Till then greetings Zoran
		18 Julio 2009 01:33
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	OK, I'll wait. Thanks
		5 Agosto 2009 09:24
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Now that you are back...please could you help me with a bridge? Thanks in advance CC: stevo
		5 Agosto 2009 15:03
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Hi Stevo, this is the original in Esperanto, you can post the bridge here as a message
		13 Agosto 2009 09:57
	lilian canale Cantidad de envíos: 14972	Esperanto experts, Since none of you answered my posts, could any of you check this bridge in English for evaluation, please? The makeup enhances you The routine of the night is unpleasant Despicable action, money in hand, the scene is cold Still, you freeze The environment is destructive Need, afraid of dirty, inglorious money Under a fine fur coat Your wound is hidden This place is a veil for the battle of life You scaped at night from your family Fake picture, sappy note, message of mud Sir, there is a tragedy Sir, you act with no awareness You pay for this love You pay and go away - fleeting passion CC: zciric stevo goncin