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Tradução - Árabe-Inglês - طائري الحبيب لا تتركني وحيده فليس لدي اصدقاء...

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Título
طائري الحبيب لا تتركني وحيده فليس لدي اصدقاء...
Texto
Enviado por لميس
Língua de origem: Árabe

طائري الحبيب
لا تتركني وحيده
فليس لدي اصدقاء سواك

Título
Oh my beloved bird
Tradução
Inglês

Traduzido por jaq84
Língua alvo: Inglês

Oh my beloved bird
Desert me not
For you are my only friend.
Notas sobre a tradução
Oh my beloved bird
Desert me not
For you are the only friend
I've got.
Última validação ou edição por lilian canale - 16 Junho 2008 01:16





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5 Junho 2008 03:11

lilian canale
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jaq84,

"Desert me not" should read "Don't desert me"

5 Junho 2008 07:00

jaq84
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You are allowed to change the structure of the sentence when a poetical necessity arises.So, the sentence is correct.

14 Junho 2008 06:59

elmota
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wow jaq, im impressed the original does not rhyme at all, well done

CC: lilian canale

14 Junho 2008 07:35

jaq84
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Thanx!

15 Junho 2008 13:57

shahrazade
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my lovely bird
do not leave me alone
cause you are my only friend
أعتقد أن هذه الترجمة الصحيحة

16 Junho 2008 07:26

jaq84
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You could also say:
My lovely bird
Do not leave me alone
Because I have no friend but you
(OR)
My dear bird
Don't leave me lonely
Because you're my only friend

And you know what? You could go for ages suggesting translations for that piece and no one can ever say it's wrong as long as it conveys
the meaning.

But I'll tell you what I think.
When it comes for translation I do not like to
use the words right and wrong to talk about
the translated text as long as it conveys the
meaning.
I'd rather use the words:
Good, better and best.
Why? here we come to the next point that translation is an art. It's the art of writting someone else's ideas in your own words. But not simply that, you should be careful to the type of writing you're producing be it poetry or prose comedy or tragedy...etc. all that in additin to the meaning of the text.
And I believe, even if the original text didn't seem good enough in order to be translated beautifully then you should stir, I do not know if it's right to say that, but you should stir your imagination a bit.
And that's what I tried to do.
Thanx for suggesting the other translation and thanx for taking the time to read my message.