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Senest vurdert og redigert av Lein - 8 Januar 2010 13:43





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7 Januar 2010 14:57

Lein
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Hi Gamine

'Sie' is used as the polite form of (singular) you here. I saw you translated it this way in the last sentence, but the first one says 'they' instead

My suggestion:

You have registered for the free electronic newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" (or your translation which is fine).
In order for us to start sending it, free, we ask you to confirm your order.

What do you think?
I am not completely happy with 'start sending it', but I think 'supply' is not the best word here either. Once I have started a poll we can see if anyone else has a suggestion

7 Januar 2010 18:07

gamine
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Hi Lein. I have edited the last line as you suggested. Find it much better.

Couldn't we use:"proceed" here instead of "supply" or "start sending it"?

7 Januar 2010 19:53

Lein
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Yes, that's a good suggestion! I have edited. I have also removed 'free' because I think the first sentence makes it clear already that the newsletter will be free. Let me know if you don't agree!

7 Januar 2010 20:09

gamine
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Of course, I do , dear Lein. You're completely right.
Thanks for your help.

8 Januar 2010 00:18

gbernsdorff
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current natural medicine ?

8 Januar 2010 12:06

Delfin71
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